It's unfair - but I love you

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종키

'And if fans never happen to notice that these days, they only sing for each other, without having to literally see their crossing glances, it’s not their fault. (Because your voice is good enough for me and every single word that passes these lips is for your ears only.)'

Key tries to deny everything that is right there in front of him - and by the time that Minho is done insulting and Taemin has come clean, Onew causes the breakdown, but it might just come a little too late. Because despite the fact that being broken with Jonghyun is better than being broken alone, Key is not good at putting people back together again - no matter how hard Jonghyun makes him want to try.

종 기 범 = 사 랑 해

Foreword

This is the first JongKey I’ve ever finished (am writing more, but this is the first to get completed!) so I hope they’re not OOC, and that you can enjoy this.

Translations in case you need them :

Daruma doll = a Japanese wish doll with blank eyes – you fill in one eye and make a wish, when your wish has come true, you can fill in the second

Dubu = a sort of tofu

Jagiya = an endearment like ‘baby’ or ‘honey’

Maknae = the youngest member of the group (in this case, Taemin)

Omo = expression of bewilderment/excitement/surprise/…

Umma = mother (Key is seen as the umma of the group)

I hate how, Romanised, if you want to be correct, you have to split up their names and start each new part with a capital letter. (Making: Onew (or, to prove my point: JinKi), JongHyun, Key (KiBum), MinHo and TaeMin) It’s so annoying T^T and I was always unsure about whether you really had to, unless I saw this vid: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZoizXdyDlI&feature=feeduand though I’m really glad I heard Key say “I love you” (I know ‘Aieru’ is translated as ‘I like you’, but it’s ‘I love you’) to Jonghyun ( you capital ‘h’!) I’m really annoyed that I am now aware of how it should be done, which means I have no excuse for doing it wrong ! (And yeah, I still do it wrong.)

Can I just point out that I used a lot of SHINee knowledge for this? I know that sounds silly, but I could’ve written a story where you don’t need to be a SHINee fan to get it, but I didn’t… I used a lot of ‘real’ moments as well, for instant, I refer to how Key once wriggled his way between Jonghyun and… I think it was a SuJu member. He seriously wriggled until the other guy decided that moving might be best because he was about to be smushed by Key entirely. It was ing adorable, who goes through that trouble?

My point being… some things I’ve described are real. The way I described them and expressed the words is mine though, so do not touch. JongKey all the way baby.

WARNING: I'm bad at making collages or whatever with the computer, so though I tried to put together a relatively good main picture to represent the story - I utterly failed. Any talents out there that want to give it a shot, be my guest please !

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susumiya08 #1
Chapter 1: wow that was amazing, u're an awesome writer, just beautiful. I'm sorry I don't have the right words to tell u. thanks 4 writing
-iloveyou-
#2
aww seriously i love this omg i love how it was written with more description inside the brackets like ahh its so vivd its like a smal play inside my head it was beautiful loved it rite more <3 :)
OnlyHope #3
I can't even. So beautiful. Heartwrenching and bittersweet. I could picture the entire thing in my head. I. Loved. It. Thank you so much :) <3
SherlocKey #4
This. Was. So. Beautiful. I. Cannot. Find. Any. Other. Words. To. Describe. It.
JongKeyLove #5
this was amazing <3