Silence

Description

"You took my breath away."

One day a boy with rinkling bracelets and loud eyes comes into his shop and then Jonghyun just kind of loses himself - and with losing himself, he finds himself again, too.

Foreword

I wrote this because I had to. It literally hurt to have these words stuck in my head with no way to vent them. So... I vented, I guess. And this is my result.

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Xoxflyxox #1
Chapter 1: This is truly beautiful. All the discription. It becomes addictive and you hang on every word just to imagine the beauty your words creat for the story.
ShawolVIP #2
Chapter 1: *sniff* this is so perfect I can't even.
Eleana #3
I don't... This is... Wow. I think I need to read it again after a while, somehow I felt like I didn't understand anything but then I suddenly did and now I feel weird. They are total opposites of each other and that breath-silence thing was maybe like the greatest metaphor I've ever seen? Oh my god, I feel this is so full of symbolism that my head is going to explode from admiration. Am I weird like that? :D

Can't say anything else but agree with the earlier with my whole heart.
kamikazexox #4
This is beautiful. Just beautiful. It takes my breath* away; I'm truly impressed.
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