Chapter 1: This was so real and thick with raw emotion. Like a thoroughly marinated steak that still ends up being too tough but, it has to be eaten for nourishment and at the end of the meal there's a glass of red wine that both soothes and burns. I utterly adore your writing.
Chapter 1: wow why didn't THEY get married, *sobs* what happened, poor OnTae, does Jinki still love him, SAY SOMETHING Tae, and I'm sure he'll leave that b****; THIS IS NOT THE REALITY I WANTED, *sobs* why, why, * falls to the floor sobbing* you ave to fix this; it's not right, it's just not right; I'm gonna copy unni_ontaeHolic but raise her and shut my eyes AND stick my fingers in my ears, - lalalala;sobs:lalalala;sobs:lalalala;sobs:lalalala;sobs: *heartbroken* *dies of a broken heart*. ;-(
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