ACUTE [Oneshot]

Description

As our feelings swing in this cold room,

my sharply gouging spearhead becomes soaked.

In the brief moment when we flare up like fireworks,

we scorch each other, and then each others burns, gently...

 

I thought things were fine the way they were.

In a night when I had started running away,

The rain rang on the window loudly,

as I was being tormented by regrets.

 

Something like "I want you to have eyes only for me",

there's no possible way for me to just say it out loud.

At the conclusion of this twisted love,

what can you see?

 

As darkness deepens, my desire becomes unleashed.

I want you to answer me right here, right now ("Who do you love more?").

Someone else's shadow is disappearing and reappearing,

so bury my body in your chest, as if you are frightened ("A feeling that will never reach").

 

The truth you've always wanted to find out ("The one that I truly love is..."),

is my newest LOVE RELATIONSHIP ("That love was play after all").

Emitting dry and dull sounds,

the cogwheels are turning.

 

I keep on having faith in YOU,

but now I need to wind up my unrequited pain.

We were supposed to love and bond with each other,

but it was all a deception after all.

 

A sudden phone ring brought up an entangled friendship.

Patching one lie with another, you kept on smiling.

As I cling onto your excuses of painful desperation,

my rusty heart can only slowly become paralysed.

 

("Are we no longer able to restore everything back to the way it used to be?"

 "But it was all YOUR wrong doing, wasn't it?

  The one who broke our promise was also YOU.

  SO NO, I CANNOT ALLOW THIS KIND OF THING TO HAPPEN.")

 

As our feelings intertwine in this cold room,

I want you to answer me right here, right now ("Who do you love more?").

The devil's voice has pierced into me, and won't go away.

Now tear off your mask and show me your true face.

 

As darkness deepens, our love will never return.

My sharply gouging knife-tip becomes soaked.

Until we pop and perish like the fireworks,

let's scorch each other and burn away everything, gently...

 

("I WILL SNATCH EVERYTHING AWAY FROM YOU.

  HIM, YOUR MEMORIES AND WHATEVER ELSE...")

 

 

 

 

Foreword

So... I'm back with a new fic. My first ever oneshot. Inspired by a song called ACUTE by Vocaloid. Try listening to it. It's a really nice song with a deep meaning. It depicts the pain of betrayal clearly.

Anyway, I hope you guys will read this fic with an open heart even if it might turn out bad or mundane or stuff or even worse, just plain blegghhh. Comments and subscribers would be nice. Mostly comments.

A/N: Pics aren't mine. They're credited to they're respective owners. I just edited them a bit.

Haniey
Finally! It's actually done!

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AnnoNiji #1
Chapter 1: OMG. Their story is so sad and all... T_____T But well it was very painful for Seobie... Even if DooKwang was guilty as hell... aigooooo ;___; Well writing~
A-Light_CHENsation #2
Chapter 1: Whoa talk about desperate. I was hoping for a more peaceful ending but it was very original. Good Job!
iamlovers
#3
Looks interesting ^^