Those Last Shards

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"Far, far away, in a land of snow and ice, lived the Queen of Snow. Oh, how beautiful she was. You would have been surprised by her grace, by her sweet smile that seemed to shine in the darkness of her land. But she had a secret, one that, in the end, was the reason for her death.

Oh, you think it was otherwise? You think she let the little boy named Kai back, you think everyone was happy?

What a fool you are, my child.

What a fool you are.

Foreword

The boy rolled his eyes as he flipped through the pages of the old book. The scent of dust and aged paper itched his nose, making him sneeze again and again, but he was far too bored to abandon the last thing that could entertain him.

The dim light of the small lamp of his room barely gave enough light for him to make out the words that seemed to have been written in a rush, scrambled and just simply messy, but it wasn't like he had another choice. He couldn't as the snow was once again falling a bit too heavily, and of course, there was no computer or television in his grandparent's house.

So, what else could he have done?

Sure, maybe reading tales was quite childish, but at least he wasn't that bored. Or at least, he tried to convince himself that he wasn't. He hadn't read anything in a while, anyway. 

With a sigh, he once again flipped through the pages, the title of one tale catching his attention.

The Snow Queen

Shrugging, he started reading the tale. Little did he know, that a pair of wide eyes were staring at him, filled with fright. If he had turned around just a bit, he would have seen the small boy's reflection in the mirror, and he would have heard those heart-wenching pleas, too.

"No, don't read it... Don't!"


AN: Okay, so this is completely not what I wanted, but hopefully it will be accepted as an entry to Weavers of Words, Spinners of Tales: Fairy Tale Contest.

I'm using The Snow Queen as a prompt, but I kind of want to..twist the story... So, it'll be more of the moral that is the same...or at least I hope it WILL be the same xD

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Evanesce_KH
#1
Chapter 2: why did i only find this now? deeming this a great story is an understatement. i hope you continue writing stories like this!
Niechahyun #2
Chapter 2: It's a little confusing and too short but you wrap it up well~~
I could say that it's well-written. ^_^
gender #3
Chapter 2: The story is very beautiful but I'm very confused right now........................
helia20
#4
Chapter 2: Wow.. It is so different from other stories Specially the way it written.. It is perfect.. I have a strong mysterious feelings from the start and a little confusing.. But after read it for r two times I finally understand it.. thanks :)
Guessthis
#5
Chapter 2: Complex and beautiful. Different from whatvr i ve read!!
TaoRisHunHan #6
Chapter 2: ...
Woah...
( O 0 O )
I have so many thoughts that I want to say... but I can't... I just... *speechless but reads again*
Fan_of_Karma
#7
Hello :) I'd like to inform you that your story has been nominated for Best Romance at World of Literature 2014 Fanfiction Awards. You may find us here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/748372/
Have a wonderful day! Karma~
MayaWith #8
Chapter 2: Oh my god.......this story........amazing....i have no words.....