Wrong order

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I know i havent been writing for an eternity now, so i wanted to start with something. And this is what i came up with. Yeah just this.

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mspaulina #1 Feb 20, 2014 06:37:21

Chapter 1: First it was like a beautiful red balloon happily floating about, and then YOU popped it! *tears*

fishine #2 Nov 15, 2013 07:48:51

Chapter 1: ehh? wh.. why TT____TT this is so beautiful... but why is he just a dream TT______TT

ChoiGiGi #3 Nov 15, 2013 06:29:19

Chapter 1: But ..but it was happy and ..and it was ...i feel sad and yet happy and ...who was who and..Beautiful ..but sad I I..lost for works lol

pikasquad #4 Nov 15, 2013 05:10:19

Chapter 1: WHAT. I did not see that coming!! What a beautiful one shot though XD even if it tore my heart to pieces ;A;

daringdarkangel5 #5 Nov 15, 2013 05:08:00

Chapter 1: AAHHh!What the.. Didn't see that coming.
Aww poor baby!! :(

Evil_Keshi #6 Nov 15, 2013 04:39:37

Chapter 1: Whaaaa ? But but but... This was so warm and fluffy and beautiful and amazing, and it was just a dream ? *sobs*

Evil_Keshi #7 Nov 15, 2013 04:26:09

I wonder what it will be about ^^ 2Min for the win ! :)