Jaded Eyes

Description

Donghae is very much in love with Seunghyun and knows they work wonderfully together, but when his boyfriend starts to become distant over a matter of weeks, there are only so many things he can think of to explain why; very few of them good.  Of course, it doesn't help at all that Seunghyun has been spending a considerably larger amount of time at his best friend's, receiving texts and calls at all hours for him to come over and his boyfriend won't explain why.  There's something Seunghyun isn't telling him and while Donghae has been patient, even that has its limits.

Foreword

Exceptional poster done by s3xyangel from Forbidden Dreamers Poster Shop.  She is amazing!  XD

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So... this would be another request from a friend (I hope you like it!).  The prompt this time was a Donghae and TOP oneshot (piece is more appropriate) and this is what happened.  It was supposed to be a oneshot but we all know how well I do those combined with angst.  lol  This was the result.  I hope you enjoy.  As much as one can enjoy angst at any rate.  >.>

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                “Hmm,” Daesung responded, face slightly concerned as he edged into the hallway.  “Should I let him know you dropped by if I see him?”

                Donghae quickly shook his head and waved his hands in negation, back stepping slightly.  “No.  It’s fine,” he explained, trying to escape.

                “You sure?” the blonde asked, one hand reaching out as if to stop him.

                “I’m good.  Thanks!” Donghae waved, turning and fleeing at a quick walk, still too dazed to feel much of anything yet.  He stared at his reflection in the elevator, ignoring the other passenger with him.  It felt like he didn’t know the man peering back at him and it was an odd feeling…

                It wasn’t until he crumpled into his car, hands resting on the steering wheel, that the emotions caught up to him and he damn near choked on them.  Seunghyun had picked Jiyong up and they were presumably together, wherever they were, since he wasn’t at either apartment and now his phone wasn’t on and he really was cheating on him, wasn’t he?

                With his forehead pressed against the steering wheel, Donghae gasped for breath around sickened, helpless sobs, knuckles sticking out starkly as he gripped the wheel with a vice-like hold.  For a moment, he tried to formulate the thought of turning the car on and actually driving somewhere but his stomach had turned itself into a mutinous ball of nerves and his eyes refused to clear long enough to see straight for more than a couple seconds at a time.  Combined with the decided lack of food, seeing that he hadn’t eaten since lunch and it was dark already, he didn’t have the resistance to do more than kick the seat back and turn onto his side awkwardly, staring at the dark screen of the phone in his hands.

                He had sense enough to make sure the doors were locked but then he turned the phone on and called Eunhyuk.  To make his day even worse, for whatever reason, Eunhyuk didn’t pick up and it went to voicemail so Donghae did the only thing he could think of.  He whimpered in a broken voice, “I really think he’s cheating on me,” and ended the call, dropping the phone into the back seat as he closed his eyes to just rest them for a moment.

Amalya
Yes! Poster is done and I think it's gorgeous! ^_^

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soleis
#1
Chapter 3: first of all, interesting paring, I never imagined Seunghyun and Donghae together, but they fit very well in your story and second I liked how the whole time I was wondering just what was going on with Seunghyun, I was like "please don't cheat on Donghae,please, please" :D and he didn't !!! <3
Sweetlikeposion
#2
Chapter 3: Oomfg!!!! Loved it!!! I hirt so bad for Hae T.T but it was a good twist! >.<
Amzing! There should be a sequel to it >.<
lilspydermunkey
#3
I never would have pictured these two together, but it worked out really well. Sequel? :oD
ThatOneOtherWriter
#4
Chapter 3: Ok. I'm on my way out so this would have to be short and sweet cause I fell asleep DX

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMOGMOGMOGMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG~!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I hurt for Donghae. I really did. And then you just threw THAT in there and I was like O________________O

YOU PLAYED ME!

But it was well played :3 The misleadings and the contexts were skewed just right and it played out so well that we were all left in Donghae's position.

The DAY i become this good with angst, I swear...

♥♥♥

THANK YOU SO MAUCH~!
toyouwhohasnoname
#5
Just wanted to thank you for a good read. I read this... well I don't know why... I don't really read fanfics with either of these guys but this caught my eye and I really enjoyed it... Uou got a very nice style of writing.. Just wanted to tell you xP
greenrocky3 #6
Chapter 3: I've read this in one go and I've loved it!! Amazing plot and a great construction of the events. I love angst, so this was really delighting for me. :)