Username: Kamiru_kpoplover19

Story Name: I'm Just A High School Junior and I'm...Married?!

MARKS:

Plot:

-         It's the seniors who throw this story into the fun it is. 
Good, fun plot to read. I like this plot because it is generally fun. =)

22/30 points

English:

Overall, the English is good with a few mistakes here and there.

examples:

In Sunggyu's introduction, you mention him as a confidante. Now I am pretty sure that is the feminine version of the
word used on a women.

The tall, handsome boy in front me said... - Should be, The tall, handsome boy in front of me said...

Tan - Should be Than.
(Sorry, already deleted the screenshot of it, so I can't get the full sentence)

24.5/30 points

Creativity:

-       I have only seen a few stories out there like this but I am sure many others have seen much more stories along the lines of it.

6/10 points

Description and Title:

-  The title, I think, is quite long. It describes the basic story perfectly because well, the story is what is in the title.
Some might say that your description is too long and tells too much description but I find it perfect.
It is like a catchy song you hear on the radio, it's just that good that you find yourself somewhat bopping to it.
In Romeo and Juliette by Shakespeare, the storyline and ending is told in the prologue, so you really have nothing to worry about if people say your description is too descriptive.

6/10 points

Writing style:

-      The style you have set your chapters out are very easy on the eyes as I read off my iPod Touch.
It is really good that you have the name of the personn's view in a larger size alongside the time in which the scene takes place.

Now, the flow is really good in my eyes as you can see and sense the feelings slowly changing. 

7/10 points

Enjoyment:

-   I have really enjoyed this story so far and would like to keep a look out on it in the future.

7/10 points

TOTAL SCORE: 72.5

STAR RATING: 4

Now, I hope you don't mind but I took a look at the other reviews you had done before I started this review
and thought that some of them were a little harsh. Shakespear has been one of the most famous writers and yet in some of
his plays, the whole plot and ending were revealed before it even began.

Good luck with the completion of this story.

If you would like any of your other stories reviewed, please don't hesitate to request.
Or if you do not understand something, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Reviewed by _uraqt