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For them, the point of attending school at all was something like putting up a show

Known as the nation which values academic grades above food, walk into any Korean school classroom and one would likely find teachers ordering their students to study harder for the upcoming examinations, or students in hysterics after finding that their ranking had dropped two places.  Students committing suicide over the stress of having to do well in their studies is a common occurrence.  However, in Yong Shin High School, the only students who actually bothered to put in effort to study were those in what was called the Social Care group, allowed to walk the same corridors as honest-to-goodness heirs and heiresses because their parents worked for their schoolmate’s parents.  The rest of the student populace?  For them, the point of attending school at all was something like putting up a show to reassure the public that the future generation owning their country would be capable enough to ensure prosperity and stability.  In simple terms, putting up a front.  They didn’t have to worry about graduating from university for a degree which guaranteed a slightly higher chance of obtaining a good job; their future was laid out neatly for them.

Unlike the other Social Care kids, Cho Han had nothing against standing on the lowest rung of the school’s hierarchy.  As he always joked to his younger twin sister Jin, being looked down upon on a daily basis was better than the ambiguous treatment students from New Money families had to endure.  At least he could be certain about where exactly he stood in the food chain.  Plus, he had the luck of being two years younger than the youngest child of the Yong Shin empire, which meant that neither of the heirs could be bothered with his existence, just the way he liked it.

By the time he entered high school though, his father had already resigned from his post as personal secretary to the wife of Lee Yong, the president and owner of the corporation, and had encountered unexpected success with his restaurant after three years of struggling.  In those three years, Han dropped out of his second year in Yong Shin Middle School to enroll in a regular public school and suffered at home during mealtimes because he and Jin were relegated the ‘important’ job of testing his parents’ food experimentation results.  What began as a humble push-cart stall grew into a small rundown eatery, expanding further into a restaurant, and branched out into franchises that spread rapidly over Korea. 

As Han’s first year in high school came to an end with many good-natured complaints about the crazy levels of studying stress, the Cho household’s atmosphere was tense for well over a week: his mother had broached the subject of him transferring into Yong Shin High, and of course Han had no intentions of going down without a fight, despite claiming back then that being in the Social Care group was fine by him.  Jin, resigned to her fate of having to mingle with the rich brats again, could do nothing except sigh, shake her head at her brother’s sulking figure, and return to her book.  She agreed with Han’s completely valid arguments that entering a new school in the middle was troublesome, and that she would dearly miss the friends she had made, but she also understood that to her parents, securing entrance into the school of the Rich was a crucial political move they had to make in order to seal their admittance into high society.  If they wanted to attract partnership offers or investments – and they did – this would bring them a step closer.

When Jin carefully laid out the logic behind the transfer to Han, he gave her a confused But aren’t we doing well enough already? followed by a scowl because she was ‘taking our parents side again’.  For the millionth time, she questioned whether the attending doctor had mixed up who was born first; that Han was older than her, albeit by a mere twenty minutes, seemed a fluke – she was the unrivalled mature one of the two, something that was getting increasingly obvious.  The younger twin was not worried though.  Han may have a child-like mentality, yet the intuition of children was surprisingly accurate, and she went to sleep knowing he would come around eventually, if not because he actually agreed, then it would be because he never could stay angry for long.

At the traditional New Year party hosted by youths for youths, Lee Jongsuk heard from Park Hyungsik that a pair of twins who had previously attended YS Middle School as Social Care students were supposedly returned, strangely, after several years.  Hyungsik jokingly asked the second-in-line whether his father had sent their family overseas and brought them back again, to which Jongsuk laughed noncommittally.  He didn’t give the conversation any further thought even though the mention of ‘twins’ faintly rang a bell; quite a number of YS employees’ children frequently came and left the schools, and he had no interest in keeping tabs.  Shrugging off the nagging feeling, he maneuvered through the dense crowds in search of a certain Ahn Sayoung.

rambling, yours truly

Congratulations to -exciting for the exciting fascinating character Cho Han!  I look forward to exploring the possibilities his background holds and to work with his character, which has a ton of potential for development considering the kind of environment he's going to endure.  For now, he's been slated as a minor character, but that doesn't mean he isn't important, so rest assured; by 'minor' I really mean he's something of a second lead in dramas, and will have plenty of appearances.

This concludes the selection process BUT don't leave just yet, because your character has the chance of showing up as a cameo, and if s/he grows on me, then you can be sure that s/he will often be written in.  I honestly have too much of an obsession with non-main characters.

Question of the day: How does your character address his/her parents?

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peachysoo
#1
Chapter 16: I really like all the interactions here, from Yuri and Sayoung's all the way to Myungsoo's and Jessica's. Even if you think it's filler, it doesn't seem that way, especially since it feels like you're setting things up for some important plot points. I wonder what's going to happen at the Welcoming, though. And I like all of the details you've added. Sungjoon's and Kwon's relationship is glorious and I can just picture the two as you have them. Sungjoon definitely has his work cut out for him with Kwon, but he wouldn't have it any other way. And poor Soo, doing his best to get himself a job. I wonder how his next interview is going to go and everything, I'm pretty excited. I think the pacing is fine and don't worry too much if you can't get all the characters in, especially if they don't fit in every chapter you're writing. Everything is looking good so far and I truly can't wait for what happens in the next chapter, especially with some of the other characters as well. Thanks for updating.
-exciting
#2
Chapter 16: Okay ive read it all and wow i really missed your writing!!!!
dont disappear for any time longer please!!
i hope this story will continue on.
so, about the story plot, id say that its going at an appropriate pace right now.
just keep going until youve gotten all of the heirs ( main charas ) to meet. Or coincidentally meet, i dont know.
then after that just focus on the main charas with how youre already writing it. ( a section of the update for a certain character, like that ) with mentioning of the minor charas.

Good luck autgor!
seungpal
#3
Chapter 16: I haven't finished the whole chapter yet
(it's incredibly long after all)
but I'll just say this
I'm really happy you're back
and I hope this story won't get shelved
because this is way too precious <3
paperboat- #4
Chapter 14: wow, this is really nice
i love your writing style, its really neat and intriguing at the same time
love how you portrayed all of these characters without making me confused
i knew who was who when i read the first line of each paragraph and its good you didn't go too overboard with the characters on the first official chapter itself
wow, i'm really excited for it and the welcoming sounds so cool, like an old tradition but still up here with the modern times
also can i get an extension for the deadline? i'm so sorry, i wanted to finish my app earlier but life is just so hectic /TT_TT\
peachysoo
#5
Chapter 14: Man, I really do enjoy your writing. It's crisp, clean, and just very refreshing to read. I like how you're portraying the characters and all the insight I'm getting into all of them as well. Changshin sounds awesome and his relationship with his father is definitely interesting. Kwon's written well as always, I just love his 'I don't give a ' attitude that he has. And I can't wait to see how his and Changshin's relationship develops in the future, it will definitely be an interesting one I'd say. Tiffany sounds pretty sweet and her interaction with Hyungsik was cute. Everything is really great so far and there's a lot of questions that I have that I'm sure you'll get to writing in the future. And Myungsoo, he's such a cutie and I can't wait to see how you write the meeting between him and Kwon. I'm really enjoying this so far and you're doing a great job with it.

1.Depending on his mood, Kwon would either go with a tuxedo, envisioning himself as James Bond, or would wear a three piece black suit with red accents.

2. The idea seems interesting, so yeah, I'd probably try to apply if I could.
kmusiclover
#6
Chapter 14: i really love your writing!!! don't worry about how your portraying the characters cause your doing a really awesome job at it.
changshin and kwon, love their attitude and can see them becoming friendly rivals in the future!! they both have so much charm and charisma just naturally flows out of them.
i really liked how choongjae was amused by the kwon's little outburst xD can't wait to see more interactions between them.
so apparently cho hyun, decided on song joongki to go to the welcoming instead of his children o.o ooohh what's going on there?
i do prefer a lengthy chapter with juicy details, since after all i'll be left suffering in suspense for a week, but don't feel pressured by it LOL seriously though, can't wait for the welcoming!! /excitedforthedrama

i think sena would wear a long black dress. like this:
http://ibelievedress.com/Public/Uploads/Products/20130107/Satin%20High%20Neck%20Long%20issy%20Teigen%20y%20Black%20Evening%20Dress%202012%20Grammy%20Awards%20Red%20Carpet.jpg
(with the tied up ponytail and the long dangling earrings as well.)
her mother would want her to wear something else, as usual, but sena would just wear that dress anyways.
-exciting
#7
Chapter 14: Okay wow so basically i am grateful that your chapter made my day. The amount of words were just perfect considering the font and the format.
Okay, onto my rambling;
For some reason when Changshin was to make a dramatic exit, i kinda imagined it in an ultrafabdivaish way so it was kinda funny. ;)
And Tiffany and Hyungsik interaction was adorable. I was like Typical Hyungsik the whole time reading it and i wish i was as pro as Tiffany. If it was me, i would have just did my own biz without caring. So good luck Tiff!
When i saw Cho Hyun, i was like :) i like how you described han and jin ;)
AND WENG KWON LET ME JUST LOVE YOU.
Istg, i have a feeling he's more of a aintgottimeforthis badass and myungsoo! Ohmygod hes such a cutie!
Anyway, the welcoming sounds super intense, hope the charas will be able to be okay and not break down!
Thanks for updating author!
And Han would mostly wear like a typical formal casual-ish, unless Jin or his mother makes him dress otherwise.
Batrizy #8
Chapter 14: it doesn't seem too long nor does it feel dragged, so all is good.
Rich people like free things more than us but never admits it.
Tiffany thoughts about the shoeless thing is funny and true.
Everyone seems to be in character and Soo is finally here.

Q1 : Vintage dress, probably her grandmother Chanel. Dusty pink, lace and form fitting.

Q2 : Perhaps, because I still have 4-5 unfinished apps and an important test this november. If there's a diva chara, then I'm in.

Jo Minho !
kmusiclover
#9
Chapter 14: it's 1am so imma go to bed, but i promise to read and give a lengthy comment tomorrow ^^
i'll pm you the source code now.
Batrizy #10
Wu Yifan song is the official soundtrack ? Gonna listen to the song later.

For English perhaps Lana Del Ray song esp Young & Beautiful.
FEMM songs for Sayoung like Dead Wrong. T-ara I'm So Bad works too.
Lim Kim All Right for chara that been dumped.
Yenny Nothing Last forever for sad moments.
Daughter Medicine for chara w/ drugs / problem.
Gravity Sara Bareilles for anyone who feel trapped.