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THE TWILIGHT

IS OUT TONIGHT

I'M ALL ALONE

HERE WAITING

WITH AN EMPTY SPACE

BESIDES ME FOR YOU

WITH THE STARS

AS THE ONLY COMPANION

 

" I saw you in a boat, paddling away in the middle of the lake. There was a fog crawling at the lake filling it slowly. I can still see you rowing further away. I called your name, " Junnie . . Junnie . . Junnie . . " But you won't turn your head but kept on paddling away, away from me, further and further you go. I called your name, " Junnie . . Junnie . . Junnie . . " But you don't turn your head towards me. The fog is getting thicker and I could hardly see you and the boat . . I start panicking 'cause . . you are getting further away from me . . I called your name and shouted as load as I could possibly can calling your name, " Junnie . . Junnie . . Junnie. "

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lanternofhair #1
great story!@
kpopartory
#3
Hello! @keeper! Thank you for reading it! And thank you for your comment!<br />
I know, you may think friends, only at chap 9, will you get it lol that they are twins lol <br />
I always wait for your comment, and what you think about something I wrote.<br />
Thanks a lot @keeper!<br />
dream_keeper88
#4
omo... twins...<br />
okay, at first, i thought i was reading about two childhood friends, junsu and a girl (junnie) ^^<br />
it's easy to read your story...<br />
i know exactly what's going on... even with just a few words...<br />
your style is really unique...<br />
poetry in prose, prose in poetry... haha!<br />
nice work poptart ^_^