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[DISCONTINUED] Paranormal and the Sea

Kevin's POV
Eli and I had just finished our schedule and we decided to stroll on the beach with a refreshing breeze coming from the sea. We walked through the dunes when we saw this person lying on the sand.

When we got closer, I saw it was a girl. She was really pretty, but what caught my attention more was the fact she was bleeding. And not just a small wound, no, a huge gash was covering her side.

I also noticed she wrote something in the sand with her blood. I nudged Eli who stood next to me with wide eyes, just as shocked as me, and I pointed to the message.

'BRING ME TO HOSPITAL PLEASE! BLOODTYPE: B (like Dongho's) Kevin: Don't carry me. Eli would be a better idea, even though he doesn't work out.'

Eli's eyes got even wider and he slowly turned to me. I gulped and looked him in the eyes.

"Kevin..." he began, voice almost failing him. "I know. She knew about us..." I whispered back.

"So what do we do now?" Eli's asked me, his voice cracking. "Well, we can't let her die here, now can we?" I said unsure about the matter myself.

"No..." he answered back. "I'll carry her, she was pretty clear about that..." he said softly, voice trailing off. I just nodded. He picked her up bridal style and we took off towards hospital.

 

Kiseop's POV
Soohyun and I walked out of the company's building when my thoughts went to Kevin. (A/N Sorry VinSeop shippers, but no romance between those two! They're just friends. >_<)

He promised he would call me when he finished his schedule. But the thing is, his schedule ended 30 minutes ago and he still hasn't called. "Soohyun hyung, do you know where Kevin is? He promised to call, but he didn't."

"Probably with Eli again, sadly enough," Soohyun hyung answered, but I couldn't understand the last part, since he mumbled that.

"What did you say? The last part, I mean," I asked. "It's nothing. Forget about it," he answered me. I reluctantly decided to let it go.

My thoughts then were once again occupied by that skinny boy. "Should I just call him?" I wondered out loud. Soohyun just eyed me, then shrugged.

I got my phone out of my pocket and scrolled through my contacts. I smiled satisfied when I found him. I quickly hit the call button next to ‘Kevin’ and held the phone at my ear.

"Hello?" the other line asked after a few rings. "Kevin. It's Kiseop. Where are you? Why didn't you call?" I answered.

I was met with silence. "I'm with Eli on the beach. Sorry, I forgot to call you. But I'm really busy right now, so-" "You finished your schedule already! So with what are you busy right now? And you're on the beach with Eli?"

I cut him off. I heard Soohyun whisper a soft "I knew it!" next to me, but I ignored him and listened to Kevin's response instead.

"Ah, well... We decided to take a stroll on the beach, but then... something happened and… we're on our way to hospital now." Kevin answered after a pause.

"You're on your way to hospital?! What happened? Did Eli-" "No no no! It's not like that! We just ran across some girl lying there in a pool of blood, okay?! We didn't do anything like that! But it's really strange. It’s like… she already knew what was going to happen," Kevin cut me off, but said the last part quietly.

Soohyun, who could only hear my side of the conversation paled visibly at the mention of a hospital and his eyes widened when I asked if Eli had something to do with it. I put my free hand, which wasn't holding the phone, on his shoulder and whispered comfortingly that they were okay.

"Kevin, where are you guys now?" I asked. "You know that cafe in xxx-Street? We're in front of it right now." "Got it. We'll be there in a few minutes. Wait for us!" "Okay... Hurry!" I hung up and Soohyun and I set off.

 



A/N
Hello there, my dear readers! This is the first chapter, as you can see. ^_^ If you spot any mistakes, you can tell me by commenting, posting on my wall, or PM-ing me. I would appreciate comments, upvotes and subscribers. And thank you for reading my story! Please continue to support this story, and I will try my best to update as soon as possible!

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Chrysanthemeum #1
Chapter 5: hi!! who says no one reads ittttt i'm still hereee. good luck with your senior year! and your driver's license too. good luck with everything! thank you for writing this. the storyline is really interesting! have a good day and please do continue writing (anything) after everything's finished. ; u ;
Ukissgirllovesdongho
#2
Chapter 4: Finally dongho oppa <3
Chrysanthemeum #3
Update please;-;
Ukissgirllovesdongho
#4
Chapter 3: Hi i am new here and wow i am so curious !!!
KimLieShin
#5
Chapter 3: Huaaaa an update! >.<
I really like the story! So, YoonMi is the paranormal, right? ;)

Hmmmm... Really curious about the next chapter! Hwaiting author-nim!!!
(Sorry, I'm not really good at writing comment --" )
Vihanna96
#6
Chapter 3: Soohyun as the y guy?! I approve!! :D Also describing Kiseop as pretty, Eli as handsome and Kevin as cute is totally appropriate! ^^
I couldn't help but laugh at the word "together" being in bold in Soohyun's POV. Sorry Soohyun, I just found that funny for some reason XD
But I'm actually really curious right now... What happened to YoonMi and what can't the others find out? That she has some magical abilities or something?? Hhhhmm.....
Oh wow, I'm starting to be like you with this comment. My comments are seldom this long! :o
Well, I'll be going now. Good luck with everything and hwaiting~!
HANNITA FTW~~!!
Vihanna96
#7
Chapter 2: You should update soon, 'cause this has a lot of potential and it's really well written! Maybe during Christmasbreak? ^^
SulHwa #8
Chapter 2: HI :D
Nice story, please keep writting it
Vihanna96
#9
Chapter 1: Dear sister,
Nice story! I like it thusfar! I do have a few tips for you though: "I was meeted" should be "I was met". Also, it would be more clear if you'd write the author's note in another font or with a line between it and the story. Apart from that, it's really well written! ^^