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Mandala

“Kid, get away.” I sternly commanded Daesung who won the gold medal for the slowest reaction of the year. He was probably exhausted after I tortured him all day long, from getting stuff out of boxes, to moving furniture around and drinking that awful lemonade made purely of freshly squeeze lemons.

That reminds me of the time I snuck in an old house and found a child ghost munching on old cookies. They were moldy and smelled horrible. The ghost couldn’t literally pick the cookies, just the sensation they gave away as baked goods, sweet to the taste and crunchy in the mouth. It warmth my heart so much that I ran to the nearest store and bought a box filled with chocolate chip cookies, burnt it in a fire near the abandoned house and watched as the child devoured those cookies in their spirit form. If only Daesung was as easy to please, yet I shouldn’t compare the living, that has and wastes everything, to the death, that has and wastes nothing.

Coming back to the headless man, I figured he had been there all the time as he couldn’t have passed the barrier I placed around every possible entrance while Daesung was busy cleaning the floor spotless. That must mean something kept it in place, right behind that couch.

“No way grandma, I’m super good here!” Daesung gave me a sheepish smile before he rubbed his mouth over my pillows.

'No way?' Know what? I’ll let the kid be possessed by that ghost or something and see him throw himself out the window in a failed attempt to move the new carcass around. But that would be against the creed I had secretly signed in my head once I accepted to train my newly discovered gift. Or curse, I don’t know what it is.

Probably curse.

Yes, it’s a curse.

I grabbed Daesung’s legs and pulled him off the couch. He gave a couple of sounds that were in no way part of human language while desperately clutching to the couch. His body hit the floor soon after. My foot rested over the sofa for a second, enough to fix my target. I kicked hard the couch. It flew past half of the room until it hit the wall. The ghost’s head stood under its feet, staring at me with a sadness one could describe as tragic.

“Grandma! What was that for?” I’m sure the kid regretted meeting me. His furious look meant he didn't see my little show-off and I hoped he wouldn't too soon. I'd be judged for making him move that couch for over an hour when I could simply do that myself with the force hidden in my trained muscles.

“Go get me some stuff, can you?” I sweetly suggested while helping him up. I’ve confirmed as well that he cannot see the one behind him, nor is it affected by it. The cold chill struck my skin in rhythmic waves, something too close to the sensation of dying to be bearable. I had to get rid of that pour soul as fast as possible, but before that, I needed to hear its story.

“Fine, grandma.” He hadn’t given up? Good! I rapidly piled a list of necessary ingredients, while keeping a watchful eye on the slowly fading spirit. He’d disappear, most likely, that’s why I had to create a safe haven for the spirit to talk to him. “Errr, grandma... you sure about this?” I nodded and let not a single crest in my face signal something different. I was serious as Hell.

Well, I don’t know how serious Hell is. Moving on.

“Go to the store on the left and then go right. Follow the yellow bricks until they turn red and then enter the first shop in front of you.”

“You kiddin` grandma? I'm not Dorothy!”

“I don't care, go!” I handed him some money and pointed towards the exit. I was foolish again when I trusted Daesung won't flee with the money in his pockets.

 

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The smell of cinnamon abruptly woke me up. My mistress’s back faced me as she tended to the fire. It was dark and cold. Extremely cold. The red colors cascading her body were mesmerizing. “You failed,” so was the tone of her voice, dark and dangerous. She turned around, her raven hair shining like opal jewels under the fire’s blaze.

“I’m s---” she placed her long finger over my lips.

“Sooyoung, listen. Listen to them. Make them a safe place to stay in and to talk. I’ll teach you how,” she removed the finger and cupped my chin “I’ll teach you how to create a mandala and enter the spirit world.”

I had no idea what she was talking about. The glint in her eyes made me fear. Was there more to her unusual mannerism?

“Mistress Yuri... what is a mandala?”

 

 

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Neulji
#1
WOW I'm so happy!!! About two (or even more years ago!) I read this fanfiction and I really really liked it! i was going on a vacation and had no wifi so i saved some stories with affs offline bookmark feature and read the whole story within days. i knew that i stayed up soo late during my vacation just reading chapter after chapter because it was so addicting!
I love urban fantasy (my favorite au/genre) and the world you created was so so beautiful! i really liked the fight scenes, sooyoung's relationships with daesung and jungmin (and the plot twist at the end!).
but when i came back to read the second part, i realized that all of it was in draft mode. i didn't want to bother you (because i saw others commenting on your blog posts when you'd upload the stories again and i think you answered something about still editing or not yet) so i didn't comment and just checked a few times over the past years. to be honest, i really think that this story wouldn't be uploaded ever again so imagine my surprise when i typed in 'sooyoung priestess daesung' in my search bar today and found it (and another part i haven't read yet!!) reuploaded!
so what i want to say is that i really enjoy this AU, your world building is amazing, among all the fanfictions i've read, this is one i remember very clearly. i like the fight scenes and the plot and i'm so excited to read the other parts. i hope you don't put it into draft mode again >.<
i remember being shocked about daesungs reveal (especially since i imagined him soo much younger than he actually was in the story). jungmin was my favorite character and i like the suspense. overall, it's a really good fanfiction, i'm happy it's back and i'm going to read the other parts now ^___^
ilovesleep
#2
I don't know how i got to this page but i sure loved the entire story. Really. I read chap1-28 until 2am. The line "are you from here or from somewhere else?" gave me goosebumps. It's a common question used in old horror tales and reading that around midnight didn't help at all. I had to google who jungmin was. Lol. Im sorry. Im not in that fandom and I seriously just came upon your story on some random coincidence i dun know. Ahahahhaha. Nonetheless, i'll be heading on the sequel now. [after i sleep] thank you for writing.

Ps. Yeah, the ending was...uhm...that's why you have the sequel. ^^
ctfd_sooyoungster #3
It all started here! And by just thinking that NIRVANA will end s0on,makes me dramatic, i think im g0nna read it all once again.
RoxanaSting
#4
Chapter 29: This is a very good story! At first I though that Daesung is much younger because of his behavior, also at the end I felt slightly confused maybe because a lot happened there and you were trying to explain everything and I'm not so good in english :) also change of pov where it was Daesung pov and suddenly Sooyoung. but apart that I love everything in this story! Hey I like ravens :)
OhNoItsCheli #5
Hello! I just finished reading your story and I have to say...I frickin love it! Thanks for writing such an awesome story!
ctfd_sooyoungster #6
Chapter 37: i cant c0mment anything becoz it feels like there is more to c0me, it feels like this is just the start of something, so right n0w all i can say is Mandala 2 !! Mandala 2 !!hahaha and shin oppa is jjang!
tinajaque
#7
Chapter 37: I know its the end, but it feels so short! haha

I want a sequel with all of them, especially Death, since you brought him up in the end. I'm so curious as to how he will interact with sooyoung :)

Anyway awesome story author!!! Hope to read more from you! :D
TheAwesomeWise #8
Chapter 37: sequel! definitely!
ctfd_sooyoungster #9
Chapter 33: cute yes it is cute,... Shin oppa never fail to amaze me...
tinajaque
#10
Chapter 33: Rooting for Sooyoung and Daesung!!! I hope thdir plan works!