Chapter 1: Glad you made a one-shot author-nim. This was kinda a comeback for you :) I wish you would start writing and updating stories again because I'm really giddy waiting for it. I can see that your writing style changed, for the better of course. It became more descriptive and I must say meaningful.
Back to the story, it was kinda a cliche at first, you being in love in the sidelines but the good thing is there was something behind the story. I thought it was how enchanted Min hee was about Sehun though she is hurting but it turned out that it wasn't just hers, also Kai is. It inspired me and I think also the readers that if you're hurt, there is always someone beside you. A friend/friends that truly cares and would never let go of you. I love Kai's character because of all, he was the one who had the greatest sacrifice. And I thought Min Hee was kinda dense not to feel Kai's feelings but I guess she's just too in love.
I'm hoping for a sequel for this actually. I wanna know more about these characters and how they would face their problems and accept the truth in life. Also, I want this to be recognized :) More subscribers and comments to come. Though It has typo's, nonetheless, the story was good. ^^ FIGHTING~ I demand for a sequel xD
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