Enchanted

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This night is sparkling, don't you let it go

I'm wonderstruck, blushing all the way home

I'll spend forever wondering if you knew

I was enchanted to meet you

 

-Taylor Swift, Enchanted

Foreword

E N C H A N T E D

H W A N G M I N H E E | | O H S E H U N | | K I M J O N G I N

b l u e p i l l s 0 7

 

My very first oneshot story.

I gave it a try. Please bear with the errors and all. This story is real-life based. *cough.cough.cough* My classmate had me listen to a song and as we scanned through her playlist, I saw this song entitled 'Enchanted' and I was like, 'Oh, Taylor Swift' I actually am familiar with the song so I pressed it and listened to it. I wasn't that focused on the song until the chorus came. That same minute, I made my desicion to make a oneshot but had no inspiration but the same day, I didn't know what happened but exact things on the song happened and I just had to publish it here.

 

© All Rights Reserved. bluepills07. 2013 

 

 

ALL CREDITS TO THE LOVELY ichibaes FOR THE COVER! CHECK OUT THE SHOP LINKED BELOW! :)

THANK YOU! :)

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whitedreamm #1
Chapter 1: beautiful story.. quite bittersweet.
if you could, a continuation of this chapter would be great.
brittany17 #2
Chapter 1: Glad you made a one-shot author-nim. This was kinda a comeback for you :) I wish you would start writing and updating stories again because I'm really giddy waiting for it. I can see that your writing style changed, for the better of course. It became more descriptive and I must say meaningful.
Back to the story, it was kinda a cliche at first, you being in love in the sidelines but the good thing is there was something behind the story. I thought it was how enchanted Min hee was about Sehun though she is hurting but it turned out that it wasn't just hers, also Kai is. It inspired me and I think also the readers that if you're hurt, there is always someone beside you. A friend/friends that truly cares and would never let go of you. I love Kai's character because of all, he was the one who had the greatest sacrifice. And I thought Min Hee was kinda dense not to feel Kai's feelings but I guess she's just too in love.
I'm hoping for a sequel for this actually. I wanna know more about these characters and how they would face their problems and accept the truth in life. Also, I want this to be recognized :) More subscribers and comments to come. Though It has typo's, nonetheless, the story was good. ^^ FIGHTING~ I demand for a sequel xD
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