how did we meet?

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Sungmin and Kyuhyun have been freinds seens they were about 5 or 6(well sungmin was 6 and kyuhyun was 5)but.....kyuhyun had to move to the USA.

...when he came back he had to go to a school named SM High School. and the next thing he new was that sungmin was in his class and never even said hi to him or not even a smile or wave....

Foreword

well hello there my fellow unnies and oppas and makneas!!!!^^ i am the evil maknea or evil unnie(or nonna)......well this is my first story and stuff so yea plzs tell me if i did something wrong thxs^^

hope u can commnet and subcribhttp://www.asianfanfics.com/story/createe ^^*waves goodbye and goes off being evil to her brother*GOODBYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

ps:i am twelve just heads up

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nicky4official #1
Chapter 4: how could you!!! after so many efforts I found this story and since you're in love to the new one and letting go the old one?

you should shame for what you did!

dont be so confuse! you wont update this since your brain is full with exo!!

you arent professional!!!!
nicky4official #2
Chapter 4: GOD DAMN YOU!!!
you started as an elf, made some stories and then you wanna ma exo story?

whats going on with ELFs lately??
exo.. exo.. exo...
GOSH!!!!
kimmykwon #3
Chapter 4: You should keep writing! As a fellow writer I know what you're feeling. Here's my hint: take a break. Sometimes you're unable to write because either a) you're way to full of ideas and none of them apply to this story b) you have none. If option a, then I suggest writing a one-shot (or multiple) . They're quick and help rid you of the of the overflow of ideas. If option b, then try to find a "song" or playlist that goes with the story. It often helps get you into the mood of the story and into a better mind-frame. OMO THIS IS GETTING LONG. BETTER WRAP UP, OKAY THEN. Lastly, try not to use abbreviations in your writing, okay? Sometimes too many abbreviations makes it confusing for the readers, and abbreviations don't look as professional. SO GO FOR IT AND KEEP GOING OR LIKE YOU DON'T HAVE TO TAKE MY ADVICE BUT YEAH. COMMENCING CLOSE OF MINIRANT IN COMMENT SECTION.
beautyelfshawol #4
Chapter 4: No you should keep the story I love it! I just read it all in 10 minutes because I loved it so much! Plus, you gave me the strength to keep writing my story! If you want, I would be more then happy to be a co-author I have a lot of free time right now since I turned in all my work and I got 100 on all of them.
Emeraldrain25 #5
Chapter 1: Hey, I think this story has a lot of potential, I was wondering if you would like a beta writer though? Someone to go over grammar and spelling for you? I think it would benifet your story a lot. I hate to see good stories turned down because of bad grammar.
darkangels #6
Chapter 1: hehe you updated! why is it that someone who leaves ends up either forgetting or being forgotten? i don't know and i don't want to find out personally either! update soon ne...
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