not update

how did we meet?

sorryyy!!!

 

should i delete this and make a kai(kim jongin) story?

 

i ask this because well i have no idea  what to right and i want your opinion and plus no one comments

 

i am sorry but plzs! tell me i am so comfuded!!!!

 

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 me:D.O what r u doing?

D.O:uhhh....nothin!

lay:he is weird

kris:-peace/bunny ears-

luhan;by-no

chanyeol:BYE!-looks ay luhan-huh? i guess i should stop too

 

me:sorry!and bye!!!!^^

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nicky4official #1
Chapter 4: how could you!!! after so many efforts I found this story and since you're in love to the new one and letting go the old one?

you should shame for what you did!

dont be so confuse! you wont update this since your brain is full with exo!!

you arent professional!!!!
nicky4official #2
Chapter 4: GOD DAMN YOU!!!
you started as an elf, made some stories and then you wanna ma exo story?

whats going on with ELFs lately??
exo.. exo.. exo...
GOSH!!!!
kimmykwon #3
Chapter 4: You should keep writing! As a fellow writer I know what you're feeling. Here's my hint: take a break. Sometimes you're unable to write because either a) you're way to full of ideas and none of them apply to this story b) you have none. If option a, then I suggest writing a one-shot (or multiple) . They're quick and help rid you of the of the overflow of ideas. If option b, then try to find a "song" or playlist that goes with the story. It often helps get you into the mood of the story and into a better mind-frame. OMO THIS IS GETTING LONG. BETTER WRAP UP, OKAY THEN. Lastly, try not to use abbreviations in your writing, okay? Sometimes too many abbreviations makes it confusing for the readers, and abbreviations don't look as professional. SO GO FOR IT AND KEEP GOING OR LIKE YOU DON'T HAVE TO TAKE MY ADVICE BUT YEAH. COMMENCING CLOSE OF MINIRANT IN COMMENT SECTION.
beautyelfshawol #4
Chapter 4: No you should keep the story I love it! I just read it all in 10 minutes because I loved it so much! Plus, you gave me the strength to keep writing my story! If you want, I would be more then happy to be a co-author I have a lot of free time right now since I turned in all my work and I got 100 on all of them.
Emeraldrain25 #5
Chapter 1: Hey, I think this story has a lot of potential, I was wondering if you would like a beta writer though? Someone to go over grammar and spelling for you? I think it would benifet your story a lot. I hate to see good stories turned down because of bad grammar.
darkangels #6
Chapter 1: hehe you updated! why is it that someone who leaves ends up either forgetting or being forgotten? i don't know and i don't want to find out personally either! update soon ne...
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