Chapter 3: Aw, they didn't get a happy ending in the end. It was a nice story overall. With some editing, then your story will be even better. Good job, author-nim!

Chapter 1: The first chapter is pretty interesting. I like it how it explains the couple's feelings well. But, I'm kind of annoyed with Woohyun, who has feelings for Soojung too. I've noticed three typos, if you don't mind me pointing out...The first one is from this line: "Really you still love me?" Woohyun asked feeling excited that she still loves her", I think it should be "Really, you...?" and '..she still loves him.' The second one is from: 'anticipating how will Hyejin improve forntheir relationship', which should probably be '...for (the sake of) their relationship' or 'on their...' The third one is from: '...satisfied woth their relationship.' Otherwise, with a few minor mistakes here and there, the first chapter was nice :).

i have a feeling that i am going to hate the main girl but i also feel like i have to subscribe to this story to know what will happen because this sounds very alike to me lol xp
i also have a feeling that its going to be a good story too!! so im looking forward to reading this story XD