Chapter 13: Okay so from what I Got here... Kyu Jong finally caught up with Hyung Jun and Jung Min... they beat Jung Min up... and somehow Hyung Jun ended over a ledge. Jung Min is very weak, from the beating as Hyun Joong as beaten him already?

so Hyung Jun manages to get his barings on a window seal, and they have nice conversation... well hyung Jun loses his grip and now they are hanging again? and somehow Hyun Joong makes his way there, and is going to help save Hyung Jun...

Hong Ki knows about Young Saeng, and has agreed to help Kyu Jong with him... but Kyu Jong doesn't know if his intentions are bad or not.


I think I got it all... well my thoughts on it was pretty much an... 'OOKKKAAAYYY... now what...'

I guess I am going to have to wait for the next chapter, because There really isn't anything to talk about... the next chapter will be more interesting as we will find out how Hyun Joong got there and... everything else... the hong ki bit is kind of confusing to me... I mean why would want to help... it reminds me what how Hong ki was friends with jung min and betrayed him... is this what is going to happen to Young Saeng or kyu jong... it seems like be a friend to Hong ki means death. D:

Well till then...

yes the thing I say within my own story chapters are for a reason... XD I always try look at both perspective...

And I agree he should feel guilty... but I think it should be by Young Saeng, not everybody else. He should work for Young Saeng's love again... I guess those are my thoughts... okay now I will read the chapter.

Chapter 13: Hello my reader!!
Yes, i am going to make Hyun Joong suffer a lot, he kind of deserves to pay for what he did to Saengie...
But wait, there's a lot to come in future chapters!
I love your insights with the characters, like the things you said about the doctors, i haven't thought about that perspective. I guess i was being just mean to Hyun, i want him to feel very guilty and miserable... i am evil!!!

Let me know what you think about this chapter!

Chapter 12: Authornim why are you doing this??? Why are you making me feel pity for Hyun Joong... I want to feel angry; I want to hate him, but they way people are treating him... I just can't. I want YOUNG SAENG to make him work for his love again, not everybody making worse.

Hyun Joong owes nobody anything, besides Young Saeng. Hyun Joong did nothing to nobody, but Young Saeng. The only one he should be getting from is Young Saeng. The hositpal was wrong for letting Young Saeng go to someone they weren't even sure was his husband. How dare they pass judgement on something they know nothing about... what if Hyun Joong was out of country, and that was the reason he did not visit; would he be less of a husband base on the doctors standards. And what if the doctor was told the people who did visit Young Saeng, were people who caused part of the problem... Would he think differently? That Hyung Jun took Young Saeng's husband away... would the doctor change his opinion? I can't stand when people wag their tongue on situation they know nothing about.

Hyun Joong has finally stop letting his pride hold him back; he has finally stop being a freaking a-hole... now is not the time to bash him or he may not try to fix it. The feeling guilt can overpowered any feeling in the world if you let it.
Hyun Joong deserved to be punished, but not by anybody other then Young Saeng.


Okay got my rant out there... next section.

Is Kyu Jong sick? D:

And Hyung Jun disappeared... great... where the hell is he going to go? I said speak up, not do something stupid. D:<

Although Hyun Joong is a factor in all of this (and trust me, I am just waiting to see what is in store for Hyun Joong)

Hyung Jun and Jung Min... are major Key factors as well... in cause all of this to our poor and innocent Young Saeng.

So Jung Min putting all the blame on Hyun Joong and the way he told him about Young saeng, was a move on Jung Min's part... it was like here this is all on you... now I can sleep soundly at night.
I cant wait to see what is in store for them... (smiles evilly)

Okay I think I got my rant out... I feel better now. XD
I hope your not mad about my rant... and I mean not disrespect to your other readers XD

SO they agree with Jung Min..!!! So they think it is Hyun Joong's fault that HYUNG JUN!! thought he was a good canadate to over... just for protection and money??????

This would have never happened... none of this would have every happened if Hyung Jun and Jung Min weren't selfish to think they can use somebody 'out of love' or whatever the hell they think they were doing.

IT is a domino effect... one thing happenes, because of another.
but it all starts with Hyung Jun doing what he did that night at the club. Even if it wasn't Hyun Joong they picked out... it is not right to do that at all... and just because someone is at a bar alone... does not mean they are not married.

They could have just been having a drink alone... or they were waiting for someone. Whatever the case is... Hyung Jun seeked out a man to put his burdens on, without any thought to if the man was married, or if he already had kids... or if he was a decent person.

Whatever may have happened between Young Saeng and Hyun Joong (however wrong it is) is neither here or there... their problems were their own... and what Hyung Jun did was, convince Hyun Joong that this was what he needed to do. so he went with it, and like I said it was the domino effect
* Hyung jun put more strain on an already strained marriage
* Hyun Joong gave in, because he thought HYUNG JUN! had what he needed.
*Hyun Joong kicked out his husband (although that was very wrong)
* Young Saeng took pills
*Young Saeng wondered around, and got hit by a car by JUNG MIN
*Young Saeng lost the baby, and became blind
*Young Saeng kidnapped, because they thought he was HYUNG JUN!
* Young Saeng is now in a depression because he was thrown out, which is Hyung Jun's fault...

So besides the fact that Hyun Joong, gave Young Saeng the cold shoulder and emotional stress (Though it is a key factor)and kicked him out of the house and his life... I fail to see how this is entirely Hyun Joong's fault.

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Chapter 11: OMG!!! i laughed my head off with your comment!!

It is so interesting, because every reader perceives the story in different ways. My Spanish readers in other site, were so happy because Min told everything to Hyun, and they blame him with all the fault. So they were basically happy with the chapter. hahahah.
But you gave me a total different perception of the thing... Really cool!

Don´t hate Kyu Jong so soon, he is not so mean.
And MinJoon couple, they will receive their share in the next's chapters. Thanks for reading!

Chapter 11: OH HELL TO THE MOTHER ING NO!!

Jung MIN you son of a !!! how dare you make the blame all on Hyun Joong.... WHO was the one that HIT YoungSaeng with A DAMN CAR!!!! It surely wasn't Hyun Joong... and you can agrue that it was Hyun Joong that kicked him out..., But whose ING FAULT WAS that!!!!!

That is right you guessed it... HYUNG JUN!!!

SO how dare you put all the blame on him you piece of !!
I hope Hong Ki shots you... I hope they find you and beat the out of you...!!!! HOw dare you not tell him about Young Saeng... though I doubt he knows. BUT STILL OF HE DID THEN YOU FREAKING TELL HIM!!!!

This is mostly their fault... and I am getting tired of Hyung Jun thinking in his head...!!!! use your damn mouth and say something!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so mad right now ... I even explained this to my mother and she is mad as well!!!!!

I even through a chair (a kids chair, but a chair nonetheless.)

Though I am glad that Hyun Joong now knows about Young saeng... and what he did to make all this happen... That was not the way to tell him. yes he doesn't deserve sympathy, but getting it thrown in his face like that and getting blamed for everything.... Jung Min deserved that kicking he got, I wish Hyun Joong did more!!!

Okay let me read the rest...

Kyu Jong who the hell are you to tell young Saeng to hate Hyun Joong... you freaking kidnapped him in hope you would get him to love you... Ugh I guess I am to mad right now to think positive on what Kyu Jong is doing... I will reread later and comment just on that part...

ALso I would like to apologize for my language... I couldn't contain myself... I have never seen myself type to fast. XD

update soon..XD

Chapter 10: SOOOO Kyu Jong stole Young Saeng.... why ... why authornim why did he have to do it, when Hyun Joong rinally came to the hospital!!! he finally allowed himself to go and see him, and finally figure out what happened, but that is what he sees!!! his ego reared its ugly head, and ... ugh!! I am mad at you now. *huff*

OMG!!!! the assassin is HONG KI!!! the guy that Jung Min trusted.... so that is why he always wants to follow Jung Min... so that he could know where he is at all times. UGH!!! HE DESERVES TO DIE!!! I am very upset with HONG KI RIGHT NOW!!!

omo! what happened to Joon.... did Hyun Joong finally hear him?? I hope so, but what if it was hong ki ahhhh I cant wait for the next chapter. FIGHTING!

Hello There, sorry i just updated now because i have been a little busy...
So, here... Yes, that is exactly what happened. Kyu is going to pretend to be Saeng´s husband at least in front of the hospital. Like you said before, he falls in love with him at first sight, so he literally will do everything to be near him. He doesn´t care about consequences, so in order to help him (in a way) he do this kind of kidnapping.
But, in the next chapter you will see that he is not as bad as it looks. Actually he will be a very handy person for Saeng.
If you have more questions i am happy to answer, thanks for reading!!