The Debut

Come Back To Me

Chapter Seven : The Debut 

Reccommened Song:
2NE1 - Missing You


This song is just ing beautiful like, I cannot explain. The MV is art itself. I feel that I can really relate to the lyrics.. I'm young but I can just really relate to the song. One of my favourite songs this year.

VIXX - Voodoo

The MV is creepy - I cringed - but so good. They way the lyrics are represented amaze me. When I found out what the song really meant, I was shocked. I love the fact that they kind of created a story with On & On > Hyde > G.R.8.U (Jeykll) > Voodoo, just love it! VIXX are really the best at dark concepts.

FT Island - Madly

Honestly, I'm not the biggest fan of FT Island but I still try and listen to their songs. I love their comeback with 'Madly' the song is amazing. Again, I can really relate to the lyrics although I'm young. I also like two other songs from their album. Love it.


Recap:

"From then on, was hardcore training leading up to our debut"

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Eun Mi's P.O.V

For the past few weeks we've been training our vocals and choreography for our debut

Sometimes we would even miss some sleep just to practice until morning

We were dedicated, we wanted our debut to be perfect and flawless

A few days ago we finished off filming our mv, it was going to be released in a few hours

Right now, the members and I are practicing our choreography once more until our debut stage on M Countdown tomorrow night

We were nervous because they told us it would be live, it's our first live stage

Tomorrow morning we are heading over to do dry rehearsals, it's still so nerve-wrecking

We promised ourselves to always sing in every performance; no lip-sync unless one is sick

We want to show that we are capable of performing live with no problems

That we are a group to look out for

We want to be the group that out shines them all

When the music stopped we all dropped to the floor panting

"You girls are amazing, I know it's going to be a big hit girls, good job for today and do well tomorrow!" Our choreography said walking out of them room

"Wah.. our mv will be released in a few hours and our debut stage is tomorrow.. you guys better do well!"

"Selene unnie~ If we do well, you're going to treat us right?" Ara beamed with glistening eyes

"Lets ask manager oppa, I'm pretty sure he'll treat us" Jin giggled

"He better treat us to meat.. I feel like eating meat~"

"Ara, you always feel like eating meat"

"What ever Selene..." Ara pouted

I giggled at the scene "Either way, he better treat us to something good"

"True, we have to make him really proud!" Alice spoke up after some time

"Okay, enough talk, lets go back to the dorms and wait for our mv~" Selene said

"Lets go!" Jin yelled

We all got into the car and went back to the dorms

Once we got back to the dorms we had two hours to wait until the mv release, so we ate some lunch and talked about some of the things we could do on our debut stage tomorrow

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It was only a few minutes until the mv release and we were all crowding around the computer screen

I decided to text Kris oppa to remind him and s

To: Kris Oppa~
Yah! Kris!
Our mv is coming out soon, make sure to watch it~
From: Mi Mi ♥

A few seconds later I got a reply

Wow.. that was quick

To: Mi Mi ♥
Yah! I'm your oppa, don't just write Kris!!
My members and I are waiting! I'm expecting a lot!
Make me proud Mi Mi~~
Saranghae~ ♥
From: Kris Oppa~

To: Kris Oppa~
Mehrong~ 
Alright then, watch my stage tomorrow as well~ 
I will! Take care of yourself, and don't make yourself tired alright?
I think there will only be one more practice with me, my schedule will be more busy than usual
Fighting! Saranghae~ ♥
From: Mi Mi ♥

To: Mi Mi ♥
Aish, this girl..
I'll be at M Countdown to, so I'll see it live~ hehe~
Neh~~ the members will miss you!
Fighting! ♥
From: Kris Oppa~

Our conversation ended with that, as the mv was finally released

 

Kris' P.O.V

Mi Mi can be really cute, I'm really proud of her

Right now the members and I are sitting in the dorm around the computer also waiting for the mv

I am so excited, my Mi Mi is finally debutting!

I was busy texting Mi Mi until Tao had to poke his head in

"Hyung~ Who are you talking to?"

"Mi Mi" I responded bluntly

"I WANNA TALK TO NOONA" Sehun yelled out of no where

I sighed and ignored his comment

I am not dealing with this

"OMG IT'S OUT" Chanyeol yelled, even though we were right next to him

"Aish, so loud.. click on it! HD hyung!" Tao said

After Chanyeol clicked on it, the pause screen was black so we were really curious

We waited for a few seconds so it would buffer and we wouldn't have to wait for it to load while watching

But when Chanyeol clicked play we were all wide eyed staring at the screen

"Woah.. who is that?" Baekhyun asked

"I don't know.. but she's hot, must be a model or something" Xiumin answered

Everyone nodded in agreement

It was only the start but, what we could see was a womans body (from neck down) walking towards the camera in a tight black dress with black heels and a purse in her hand

I guessed it was a model, the curves were hot and when she slightly turned around, we could see her her because of the dress, it was y

I'm a guy okay, let me have my moment

The camera suddenly started moving up the body towards the face of the woman

We were all curious to see who it was, if it was a model one of us knew

The womans lips was smirking into the camera and when the camera revealed her whole face

Our eyes turned wider than it was

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was Mi Mi

 

Chanyeol instantly paused it, leaving Mi Mi's smirk on the screen

"OMG NOONA"

"NOONAAA IS THAT REALLY HER"

"MI MI"

"SHE'S HOT"

"OH MY GOD MI MI"

"LET ME MARRY HER"

"SINCE WHEN OMG"

"THOSE CURVES OF HERS"

The members were going crazy finding out it was Mi Mi

I just called my own sister hot and y... omg ._. 

I mean yeah, she's beautiful but I just called her y... she must not know about this

It was only a few seconds into the mv but we were all going crazy

After a few minutes of calming down, we pressed play again

It continued with Mi Mi's strong rap and lead to solos of other members 

I have to say, when it got to the chorus, it was pretty amazing

The choreography through-out the whole song was epic

The members and I were going crazy after it ended

"That is one heck of a debut" Suho spoke

"It was the best!" Chen said

"Kris hyung! I heard Mi Mi composed the song, is it true?

When Kai asked that question, everyone started to lean in towards me

Creepy

"Yeah, she did"

"Speaking of Mi Mi, she's y~"

"Don't you even touch her Baekhyun"

"I was just saying Kris hyung..."

They continued to talk about the mv while I just zoned out and decided to text Mi Mi

At one point the conversation stopped and everyone was on their phones

 

Eun Mi's P.O.V

"OMG IT'S PERFECT, EUN MI YOU ARE AMAZING"

"There's no need to yell Ara.." I sighed as Ara kept her voice so loud

We were all going crazy because of how the mv turned out, it was better than we expected

It was all talk about the mv until it started to quiten down a bit because the members were texting their close friends and family members about the mv and if they watched it yet

I kept on looking over the mv, it felt so surreal 

It was our first mv and I think we did well

It was already up to one million views within 30 minutes of release

omg thank you ;A;;

"Guys! It's over one million views already!" I informed them

"OMG"

"WHAT"

"NO"

"SERIOUSLY"

"SOME ONE HOLD ME"

"ASDFGHJKL"

We went crazy, it was like a dream

I stopped screaming when I heard my phone buzz a few times

I ran over to it and I saw that the EXO members sent me a text each

I unlocked my phone and started reading each text, starting from Chanyeol

To: Eun Mi~~
EUN MI ♥
THE MV IS GREAT! I LOVE IT! JJANG!
I WILL SEE YOU TOMORROW~ SARANGHAE ♥
From: Yeolie

This guy, his personality also shows in his texts

To: Cute Eun Mi~
Mi Mi is getting y~ kehe~
If you do well I'll cook you something nice! Alright?
If you can, come visit our waiting room tomorrow~ I'll be waiting~
Fighting! ♥
From: Kyung

He's so cute~ his food is always the best~

To: My Mi Mi ♥
Mi~ Mi~
Were you always this y?~ Let's go out on a date yeah?~
But don't tell Kris hyung.. he'll kill me..
We'll talk tomorrow okay? ;) kehe~ saranghae ♥ fighting! ♥
From: Baek

Such a charmer this one,

To: NOONA~
NOONA IS SO PRETTY~
LET'S GO SHOPPING AGAIN~
From: Panda

Always shopping with this boy..

To: Eun Mi~
Eun Mi-ah! 
The mv was debak! I love it :-)
I will see you tomorrow, good luck for your debut stage!
Fighting! Oppa will be cheering you on ♥
From: Suho Oppa

Just like Suho oppa~

To: Mi Mi!
Wah~~ The song is awesome!
Good job~ LOVE it~
See you tomorrow okay? or I'll come after you~
From: Minseok

This weird oppa..

To: MI! MI!
WoOah~ 
Mi Mi is so cool~ mv jjang~
Excited to be on stage so soon? hehe~
Fighting! ♥
From: ChenChen

Hehe~

To: Mi~ Mi~
Annyeong~ 
I can't wait to see you on stage tomorrow~ 
I'll watch out for you okay?
Saranghae~ ♥
From: Lulu

I chuckled to myself

To: Eun Mi!
Mi Mi is so grown up now! 
Ge is proud of you~ You're doing well :)
We will talk more tomorrow~ Annyeong~
Fighting!
From: XingXing

Grown up huh.. 

To: Pretty Noona~
Noona is a woman now huh?
Very y~ hehe~
Kris hyung told us that there will only be one more practice session..
I'll miss you TT_TT
Always talk to your favourite dongseng~ saranghae ♥
From: Hunnie

What a cutie this boy is~

To: Favourite Noona ♥
Wah~ Noona is very y now!
Lets go on a date to make everyone jealous~ hehe~
I'll see you tomorrow noona!
Fighting! Saranghae ♥
From: Jongin

Another cutie here~

To: Mi Mi ♥
Oppa here~
The starting surprised us all.. WHY?!?!
*sigh* Oh well, you did well Mi Mi!
You better do good tomorrow as well~
We'll all be watching and cheering for you and Danger!
Take care of yourself!
Fighting! Saranghae ♥
From: Kris Oppa~

I have a bi-polar brother..

I responded to all of the messages and then washed up 

After all the members were finished, we turned the lights off and slept for a big day tomorrow.



so i'm trying to finish a few chapters before i update so it's a bit easier

but homework has been really stressing me out
i don't have as much homework anymore but next week, it will be beach week!
it's basically a program where you get to go to the beach and learn basic survival skills, first aid things, get to play around in the water and sand, go on a town walk etc.
you have to pay obviously but yeah that will be for the whole week so i don't know if i will update
because i might just fall asleep when i get home.. 
but on the friday i have a dentist apointment so i will have to miss out on half the day...
it because friday is like the fun day TT_TT
but idk i will try to complete a few chapters and update!

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mm0923 #1
Chapter 7: More update soon pls
stephani_bap #2
Chapter 7: they all are funny! haha, baekhyun wants to date mi mi secretly^^
and sehun, such a cute boy!!
deerbaby #3
Chapter 7: update soon~^^
stephani_bap #4
Chapter 5: finally they will debut
stephani_bap #5
Chapter 4: your story is great! hope you update soon ♡
shiningdorks #6
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^