Trouble Maker

Description

Everyone has always wondered about the love life of the handsome and talented leader of B2ST... there had been numerous rumors and scandals with some of the prettiest and iest female idols, but nothing was ever confirmed, leaving many fans to question and wonder. Just who catches the eye of Yoon Doo Joon?

 

But no one would have believed, that Amber Liu -the tomboy that rocked the k-pop world- would be the one to catch his eye and make his heart race... not even himself.

 

 

Main Characters:

Amber Liu of f(x)

Yoon Doo Joon of B2ST

 

Minor Characters:

Kim Hyuna of 4Minute

Jang Hyun Seung of B2ST

Lee Kikwang of B2ST

other B2ST members

 

 

Foreword

This was meant as a drabble for my drabble challenge. TOTAL fail... I kept writing and writing... lol.. oh wells. The pairing is pure crack, but what is a girl to do? LOL Hope you all enjoy! <3

 

 

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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: That escalated quickly. lol Cute story for the most part though. I did like the setup of the whole thing and how everyone was pretty much in on it, though some of the sentences had me confused where two people were taking actions in the same line or someone else was talking while another person acted in the same paragraph without much distinction. Besides that, it all mostly made sense and it came together nicely in general.

I was a bit surprised that Doojoon wasn't even aware of his feelings for Amber before this, and that he took things quite as far as he did upon abruptly realizing it. That just seemed like a strange jump to go from 'I think I want to get to know you because my friends always talk about you' to 'omg I have to kiss you now!' See what I mean? Also that you pretty much took away all of Amber's power in that same scene. Because she starts crying, I feel as if she's become victimized, especially because he's the one that pulls away and she 'can't/won't' do anything until he does.

Those aside though, the rest was good. A little fast (to me) in the rushing into kissing after confessions part but still a cute story in the end. A little more description of the people would have been appreciated but I could otherwise envision the settings just fine. Good job and thank you for sharing.
Sweetheart123 #2
Chapter 1: OMG! this made me feel like I was there and whoa this is great
DetNaq #3
Chapter 1: Doojoon and Amber are both cool idols.. love this pairing.. hehe.. and it looks realistic to me xD
sagalifsmins #4
Chapter 1: i like the story! well done <3
clumsy_g #5
Chapter 1: Unfortunately I don't how doo joon looks like , I just imagine a random face lol
nanathedirewolf #6
Write more! Do a collection of one shot.
krisber_1806 #7
Chapter 1: Uuuh so sweet.
nanathedirewolf #8
Chapter 1: Love this paring. Didn't Amber thanks him in the Pinocchio thank to? "Doojoonie Oppa" or something along that line
Jin_Joo #9
I love this! You really ARE an anyber shipper arent you? Lol. I went and immediately read your drabbles before coming back to comment. Hope to see more updates of your other stories! Youre like one of my favorite amber authors!
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