The Last Wish

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Park Eun Ji and her brother got seperated after they got adopted by different parents,

when Eun Ji was only 7 and her brother 8.

After she got adopted and went to LA, she created a gang named Death Note,

quickly became the biggest and one of the most powerful gang in the world.

And she was the leader.

Every time she fought a gang, she will leave a paper,

red like BLOOD, written " DEATH NOTE".

Her gang and her only fight if the others have done something bad,

if you haven't done something that make Eunji mad, Death Note won't come after you.

Her father is the chief inspector from the Criminal Investigation Department, and her mother a doctor.

Her life was ruined, when her adoptifs parents died.

The collegue of Park Yejun, Eunji's adoptif father, all knew it was a murder, but they had no proof.

Eunji decided to go back to Korea just like her dad asked her, and decided to finish what her dad didn't finish.

And she disapear from the world of gangsters which made the whole world searching for her.

Eunji is put in a sitution where she wants to protect those around her but also fulfilling the last will of her father.

 

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

***DISCLAIMER: This story was the very first story I have ever written, completed in my life. It was written back when I was in high school, when asianfanfics still used the green theme. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, I won't deny it, a really messy, and weak plot. Sudden turn of events and it simply doesn't build up properly. It lack of stuctures is definitely a turn off for many reader. The story focuses entirely on Eunji's character which doesn't seem to develop.

Yet, there were many times I wanted to edit it, but The Last Wish remain the first ever fanfics I have ever completed and written and posted, I want it to remain as it is. I had gotten better over the years as I started going to English schools. Right now I am a college student and definitely I can say my writing had drastically changed, the way I plot out the stories and how I stucture them, providing more back stories, like some of you noticed with the sequel of this stories or my other fanfics.
I want to keep The Last wish as it is, the first down this special memory lane.

 

 

(c) All Rights Reserved to iammrsoh
2013
Credits to owners of pictures, they aren't own by me!

 

Foreword

CHARACTERS

 

PARK EUN JI 


   


 16 years old 

▼ Cold, powerful fighter 

 Leader of a gang named Death Note 

▼ Seperated from her brother when she was 7 

▼ Park Chanyeol's sister 

▼ Changed all her habits to protect her identity 

 Like music 

▼ Always drink cold stuff 

 

PARK CHAN YEOL


   


▼ 17 years old 

▼ Member of a gang named Exo 

▼ Good fighter 

▼ Loves to wear a cap 

▼ Funny, childish, can be very serious, caring (only to his sister) 

▼ Seperated from his sister when he was 8 

▼ Park Eunji's brother 

▼ Loves to play instruments 

 

KIM MYUNG SOO (L)


   


▼ 16 years old 

▼ Stubborn, can be caring, funny 

▼ Loves to play 

▼ Good in basketball 

▼ Member of a gang named Infinite 

▼ Kingka of the school 

▼ Strongest fighter in the gang, good to manipulate different weapons 

▼ Top student, even if he don't study 

 

BYUN BAEK HYUN 


   


▼ 16 years old 

▼ Kind, loves to smile 

▼ Member of a gang named Exo 

▼ Knows how to play piano 

▼ Always bringing his purple headphones with him, to everywhere 

▼ Kingka of the school 

▼ Same school as Eunji and L 

 

☠ DEATH NOTE

 

Gongchan

CNU

Sandeul

Jinyoung

Baro

Ricky

Niel

L.Joe

Cap

Changjo

Chunji

* They are the principales ones, there's others around the world 

 

 EXO

Kris

Xiumin

Sehun

D.O

Lay

Luhan

Kai

Suho

Chen

Baekhyun

Chanyeol

Tao

 

 IFINITE

Sunggyu

Dongwoo

Woohyun

Hoya

Sungyeol

Myungsoo (L)

Sungjong

®All Rights Reserved
This story is purely mine, some chapters are inspired by dramas, but surely modified to be my own. Please do not plagiarize. If some of you out there want to make "another version" of this story, please let me know, and we will discuss about this.

 

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_forsythia_
#1
Can I just say that, before I even start reading this, I like the Death Note references and I really appreciate the fact that B1A4 and Teen Top are here.
Star16
#2
Chapter 1: Just a side not, at the end of your prologue. Luggage is both singular and plural.
taetae29 #3
Chapter 33: When i saw baps picture(#throwback) i was like," Oh Yeaaaaa...THEY WERE BLONDE"
RaniaOS_18 #4
Chapter 100: Gosh i cried a lot when i read this XD
Thank you for the wonderful story author-nim:)
naznew #5
Chapter 101: i know that doing a medical fanfics was hard..so its okay if you delay it..
chincha? i can't wait to read it..
i'm waiting or it.. hwaiting author-nim..
ndreeanny #6
Chapter 100: So many wishes here. Eventhough not all of Eunji's wishes would become true but at least there was woohyun's.
His last wish to protect someone he loves
Oh, God, I'm so touched.
Thanks, authornim for fulfilling woohyun's last wish, that was great story..
-Anita
#7
Chapter 101: It sounds like a very logical choice to me. c: Just like RunningGaea beneath me mentions, is the 'career-switch' from gangster to doctor a nicer touch to me, than simply going from gangster to detective, but it does make sense that you want to write it like that, if the medical career path takes so much time to write. So yeah, what I'm trying to say is, is that I will follow the 2nd version, and I will most probably enjoy it, but that as of now, a medical career seems to be better plotwise. But yeah, it's up to you if you want to go through with it or not. I'll respect your decision either way. c:
RunningGaea #8
Chapter 101: But still I prefer the medical.Once a hero doesn't mean she has to be a hero all the time.With the change of a gangster to doctor is more new taste?
This is only my opinion.The choice is yours.
P0rcelin_D0ll #9
Chapter 81: Okay that was my favorite line
Asuna785 #10
Chapter 100: Chapter 91: new reader here xD (just to let you know i just finished this in one day :P)
Author i really want to visit you right now and kick your for making me cry but still ur awesome for making this story although i really look insane right now because of crying :'(
How i wish Woohyun was immortal (lol)