The Snake

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It wasn't enough. When Sungjong rips apart his teddy bear it doesn't feel like its enough. It feels...unusually unsatisfying. He needs more. Punching his teddy bear didn't quench his wrath. He needed to kill.

Hoya noticed this. Hoya notices things. He noticed how Sungyeol is not in the room. How Sungjong's teddy bear looks horrible. How Sungjong's teddy bear is heavier than one would think. How Sungyeol is in Dongwoo's room. How Myungsoo is all over Sungyeol. How Heartbroken Sungjong is. But the most important detail he notices is: How deadly Sungjong is.

Myungsoo doesn't notice this. Myungsoo doesn't notice things. He doesn't notice how Sungjong was in the room. How Sungjong is in love. How heartbroken Sungjong is. How Sungjong is in love with him. 

When Myungsoo notices nothing and Hoya notices everything and killing a person feels much better than killing a toy death is surely to come.

But the was never 'Does Sungjong kill?' but...

'Who does Sungjong kill?'

Foreword

Sequel: Broken in Love 

Genre: Angst//Romance

Rated: Teen

P.O.V: 3rd Person

Warning: Contains violence, swearing and minor ual references

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ilovesungyeollie #1
Chapter 2: Wow this was so cool!! I loved it~ the "it was me" and the "he never answered " parts were the best ^o^/
Jjong4eLternaL #2
Chapter 1: Great story author nim...
I vote for 2 alternate ending!

Fyi, in my country, dreaming abt snake actually a good sign. If one dreaming abt snake chasing him/her, it's mean that someone had a crush on him/her... If the snake bite him/her, it's mean that they'll get official... And just like that, the more damage that the snake made, the more the dreamer will get attached to the 'future someone'... :D
blackandwhite58 #3
Chapter 2: Make a chapter 1. I would really like that. And I'm sure the rest would be so cool. I really like The Snake. :)
FanFicLover92 #4
Chapter 1: oooo.... o.O ....that's cool.... :)(:
Ero-chibi #5
Chapter 1: Woah! The explanation. It makes the fic so much more. Thank you. ^^
crimsonmeester #6
Chapter 1: Hooo this is just jongie's dream or it can be his sign...
Tbh i want to see a sad ending and myungsoo regret it. But i want to see happy end too... so i voted to two alternate ending xD
GyunGyunMinMin #7
Chapter 1: btw what did sungjong mean about the 'it was me'?
InspiritYuki #8
Chapter 1: Yes this story was really good but I don't get it when he "It was me", what didn't his hyung know?

How sad though..I'm guessing Sungjong's dream , the meaning, is real:(

I really liked the story even though it was a bit confusing^^
GyunGyunMinMin #9
Chapter 1: nice meaning for the story

_HWAITING_
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