Fragmented Ashes

Description

Sungjong loves dreams. He really, really loves dreams and things that aren't real.

He loves Myungsoo too. 

But Myungsoo is real, too real. 

Sungjong hates 'real'. He really, really hates real.

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Star·dust  (stahr-duh-st)

n.

1. A dreamlike, romantic, or uncritical sense of well-being.

2. A cluster of stars too distant to be seen individually, resembling a dimly luminous cloud of dust.

Idiom:

have stardust in (one's) eyes

To be uncritically or unrealistically optimistic.

Antonym: Fallen Ashes

 

 

Foreword

Written For ❝ time machine ▬ a writing contest. 

Prompt: And in the end it all snaps back to shattered stardust and fragmented reality.

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Sungjong awoke to the beautifully intriguing sound of silent whispers.

His eyes opened to the pleasingly fresh colour of pure freedom.

His feet touched the plush, cosy ground of soft carpet.

His fingers lingered over the smoothest surface of calm porcelain.

His eyes smiled at the happily pretty features of Sungjong.

And in the end it all snaps back to shattered stardust and fragmented reality.

Sungjong awoke to a horribly screeching sound of silence.

His eyes opened to the disgustingly suffocating colour of plainness.

His feet touched the coldest ground of carpet.

His fingers lingered over the roughest surface of porcelain.

His eyes scanned over the ugliest features of Sungjong.

And in the end, stardust gradually turns into Fallen Ashes and crushed dreams. 

 

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deliberatemistake
#1
Chapter 1: Ouch, didn't expect that. But well written, very nicely written. The beginning was amazing.
LycheeJelly #2
Chapter 2: Jongieeeeeee. ;A; This is so sad. Sungjong is hurt, but I can't blame Myungsoo because he's hurting too. In the end, no one is happy. ;;

I look forward to the sequel! I'd like to seem how things turn out afterward.
AveniA
#3
I love this fic so much! I've read it like 3 times through!!!
Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story!!
I'll be waiting for the next part (that's if you're going to do one xD)
Authornim Hwaiting!
ghouled
#4
Chapter 3: wow. this. it just gave me an overwhelming sensation. ill be waiting for the next installment.
pandawire
#5
Chapter 3: Are you kidding? This story is quite creative. I'd love to know your inspiration for it and I'm eager for the next installmet.
Momoleee #6
Chapter 3: i dont mind any! either you continuethis amazing story or do a sequel!
Sungel1004 #7
Chapter 3: Woaaha.....This story gives me chills~
andaeriel #8
Chapter 3: Exciting. I had to make sure my angel is all right.. i hate him suffered alone