Chapter 2: what the?! Luhan what r u doing?
what the hell with sehun on ur phone?
ohh, i like the story line but u make few typo on ur fanfic authornim hehe
but its ok, i'm okay with any grammar, cuz i realy understand this feeling hic hic
plz update asap :D

Chapter 2: noooooooooo my xiumin luhan how could you? please update soon

Chapter 1: awwwwwwwww xiuhan u make me go crazyy.. please update soon ^^