Chapter 1: Well I thought I should hold back, and then I read the other comments so it.
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OH MY ING GOD THE EMOTIONS AND THEN YOU HAD TO ING GET HER MEMORY ERASED WHY YOU SICK ?!?!?!!!?!!??)! ITS TWO THIRTY AM AND THIS FIC IS NOT HELPING ME SLEEP BECAUSE OF THE ING FEELS I HATE YOU AND I love this story.
enough fanfics for like the rest of my life
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Chapter 1: So Tien, as promised, here is my essay comment. I hope you're mentally prepared for this...
Ok, so first things first.
YOU JUST HAD TO GO AND USE THAT MOTHER ER TAO DIDN'T YOU? YOU HAD TO MAKE HIM SMIRK AND ACT ALL BAD- AND Y, DIDN'T YOU? AND THEN YOU GO AND LET HIM GET KILLED. DO YOU KNOW HOW THAT MAKES ME FEEL?? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT I'M FEELING RIGHT NOW?
/punches brick wall with my face
Also I have to say this whole "kill or be killed" concept reminded me of a Japanese movie called 'Battle Royale' - have you seen it? If you haven't, wtf are you still reading this for? GO WATCH IT. I'M TELLING YOU. IT'S LIKE ONE OF MY FAVOURITE MOVIES OF ALL TIME AND THE WHOLE MOVIE IS JUST LIKE YOUR FIC, SO IT'S LIKE MY FAVOURITE ONE SHOT. AND TAO.
It always comes back to tao doesn't it? I think I'm obsessed. I think you made me this way. Ahem.
As for your writing, well, what can I say? You seem to be improving daily. What drugs are you smoking? Can I have some too pls? :---)
Also, I think that this is by far your best one shot yet, and I hope you keep doing more because I love your one shots. I mean, I love all your stories, but your one shots are just the bizz nizz, YA NA MEAN? CHYEA.
Idek what the I'm saying anymore.
But yeah, good work. You write some good . Give my regards to papa phan. Hope his singing career is going well. Also, I expect to see this fic in a store near me by christmas.
Anyway, I think I'll stop now. Because there may be a word limit on this thing? I don't know if there is because I've never hit it before, but I'm probably pretty close if there is one.
Please excuse me while I go read this over again for the 56151315615th time :--)
Hello, hi, hola, how are you doing? Ok so I don't know how many freaking times I've read this like I already memorized 90% of the story tbh! Like I'm obsessed TTnTT that's why I haven't updated omfg i just cannot go on from this! /sighs deeply Luhoney you idiot big idiot why would you do this to me goddamn it I'm cry I'm starting to think you son a gun sacrificed yourself because you didn't wanna be the winner and be killing for years damn it that's a burden tbh oTL but still omfg baby come back to me resuscitate omfg /ugly sobbing like Suho right now and Tao Tao can we talk about Tao for a freaking moment? Can you like not like just off damn it you ruin the moment! & my Tien Tien why would you kill my homie sista homegirl like no why TTnTT Tien you idiot you're another idiot we both could've been saved damn it TTnTT /sighs deeply I'm gonna cry again I'm not even kidding I come here multiple times on a daily basis and it's been only 2 days omfg someone take me to KOBK rehab TTnTT this is your best oneshot ever don't you even try to deny it this is fabulous and perfect omfg let's publish it though c'mon! Everyone would buy the book because perfection <3
Chapter 1: TIEN NIGGA MY FRIEND HOLD THE UP OMF WHAT THE JUST HAPPENED I DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS THIS WASN'T A PART OF THE DEAL DAMN IT!!!
WOW
JESUS CHRIST THIS IS THE BEST ONE SO FAR HOLY (I KNOW I SAID THE EXACT SAME THING IN YOUR PREVIOUS FIC) BUT GDI THIS ONE TAKES IT TO ANOTHER LEVEL
WHY ARE YOU SO DAMN GOOD AT WRITING ONESHOT IT'S NOT FAIR
YOU'RE CAUSING TOO MUCH PAIN GO AND REFLECT YOURSELF YOU LITTLE
I SHOULDN'T HAVE CLICKED ON THE LINK YOU YOU JUST RUINED MY PERFECT FRIDAY
"I CAN'T KILL A LIVING SOUL AND THAT WAS BERRY JUICE" OH THE IRONY! TIEN YOU KILLED SO MANY PEOPLE IN YOUR FIC ALREADY DO YOU WANT ME TO WRITE ALL THEIR NAMES DOWN OH MAN THAT WOULD MAKE A LIST
HUNGER GAMES I SEE, BUT NO THIS IS EVEN BETTER THAN HUNGER GAMES I MEAN HUNGER GAMES DOESN'T HAVE GENESIS OR TIEN OR SEHUN, LUHAN OR TAO.
OH TIEN IDK JUST QUIT SCHOOL AND BE A FIC WRITER OR SOMETHING.
OH BTW YOU KNOW WHAT I HAVE A BETTER ENDING FOR THIS FIC: A WILD MANDU COMES IN AND KILL ALL THEM INCLUDING THE WRITE BC YOU I SAID I WASN'T READY FOR THIS
Chapter 1: THIS IS THE BEST ONESHOT EVERRR!!!! When I read the part which Gen cried when she chose the wrong gun, I thought Luhan was gonna betray and kill her :/ I was so suprised at first, but it turned out to not be that way. And the end make this story become obsessive. Amazing story, thank you :))
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