Chapter 1: okay so the cancer thing and fluff (real cute tho) was cliche but chanyeol dealing with this was just... omg i cant -sobs- he certainly didnt want anybody else so the title was fitting. ^^d

Chapter 1: TuT this is just so fudging fluffy but angsty at the same time! Ahhh! Chanyeol, why you gotta be such a lovely lover? Ugh why?!

Chapter 1: nuooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo T^T
no TT nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Chapter 1: ohhh god.i feel so bad now. but this beautiful nevertheless

Chapter 1: OMG!!! SO NICE.... DAEBAK,.. JUST WOW
SO
NICE
AND
CUTE^^ LOVE IT SO MUCH
UR THE BEST AUTHOR :) SO NICE..

Chapter 1: YOU ARE JUST SO GREAT AUTHOR I DON'T UNDERSTAND YOU ANYMORE. ENOUGH SAID.

Chapter 1: WOWOWOWOWOW
WOAH
WOAKNDQPSBQP
WOW
TIEN
NO
TIEN
HANG ON
HOLD UP
WTF IS GOING ON HERE
WHEN YOU SAID
YOU WERE GOING TO WRITE A CHANYEOL ONESHOT I THOUGHT YOU WERE JOKING BUT NO YOU WEREN'T JFC

WELL /no THANK YOU DARLING/ /ok maybe not cause I don't like you/ /I do/ /I don't/ *whispers* I do

do :) you :) see :) these :) smiley :) faces :) bc :) that's :) me :) rn :) well :) :) you :) I :) hate :) you :) what :) did :) I :) do :) in :) my :) past :) life :) to :) deserve :) this :) why :) did :) I :) click :) on :) this :) link :) why :) did :) I :) read :) it :) there :) was :) no :) warning :)

IF YOU HATE ME THAT MUCH JUST SAY IT TO MY FACE UNFOLLOW ME BLOCK ME OR SOMETHING DONT DO THIS KIND OF TORTURE IT'S NOT FUNNY YOU LITTLE

LIKE

IT'S CHANYEOL WE'RE TALKING ABOUT HERE ... PARK ING CHANYEOL DO YOU SEE THE PROBLEM HERE? YOU OBVIOUSLY DONT BC YOU ING WROTE THIS ONESHOT AND MADE IT SO HEARTBREAKING /I know you're sitting there laughing at our pain bc you heartless poop/

oh and Romeo and Juliette. of course Tien of course you would :--------) it feels like you ran a car over my body 100000000x times :----) thanks darling I sure can feel the love <3


/no but really there are 12 members of EXO to choose from and it had to be Chanyeol/ wow Tien are you satan? do you have a heart? what have I ever done to you? my must you hurt me in this way ?

but, GREAT JOB HONEY *claps* keep it going my nigga ;3;

and I'm expecting a happy ending in the next oneshot or else :----------)

mmmm I'm just gonna e this simple and short because you know I'm a lazy . I knew you were gonna make both of them die cause your an evil little . the story line was great but i felt it was cliche you know. the got cancer and died then cry cry. I still like it tho. the descriptions and vocabulary was on point. overall it was interesting and good. but I think I like the other one shot more tho. oh and the title went along with the story good job for that. well here's your comment you been nagging me about. hope you keep writing and updating your fics.

Chapter 1: FREAKING ROMEO AND JULIET GOING ON OMFG POOR CHANYEOL. You described how much chanyeol loved her extremely well my heart breaks for him omg ;3;