Affliction

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The burden he had to carry alone. The sadness that engulfed his soul. The memories that haunted him. The aching pain that he had to withstand. There's nothing else that he could do now. 

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fresh-salad
#1
Chapter 1: I really like the plot twist.
ikanadia95
#2
Chapter 1: Plot twist is absolutely amazing. Never imagine it's gonna end in this way.
pcyans
#3
Chapter 1: oh god some plot twist ;n; you have nice writing style there. ^^d
Tipii07
#4
Chapter 1: Omg
I would have never thought of that!
The end was simply amazing… and what a plot twist! O:
It touched me a lot, and it was very sad… Poor the girlfriend, how terrible it would be, to take care of Sehun when he's thinking that he caused her death! :(
You write really well, this one shot is beautiful! ^^ Good job!!
flutterwind #5
Chapter 1: So unexpected :o
itzmefrs
#6
Chapter 1: pilsuk123 brought me here though and i didnt regret it. omg- totally unexpected. < 3 love it!!
loveChaejin
#7
Pilsuk123 brought me here... n I didn't regret coming
MarilynTheMushroom
#8
Chapter 1: WHOA WHAT?!?!?! I'm like speechless right now. That was just so mindblowing!!!XD
kyeopcakes
#9
Chapter 1: OH MY ING. PLOT TWISTTTTT.
That was so unexpected and scary holy Sehun nooooooooo 囧囧囧
I love it. This is beautiful omg you're really good at writing angst sobb ;~;