I worship the ability you have in these two stories to totally cut me open. How can you manage that?

Chapter 1: Gosh this is heartbreaking, more so than the original, which I didn't realize could happen until it did and now I'm a mess. Keke. It is positively fantastic how you are able to fit so much emotion into so little space, but you've pulled it off effortlessly again.

To start, one thing I was impressed by was how each entry built up until the . It starts with the shortest at the very beginning, 'I'm sorry,' and then it grows from there a little more each time, explaining the events until he addresses his death were it reaches it's highest point. Then it ends with the falling action which is shorter, more of a conclusion then continued story, so from a literary standpoint, this was amazing. But the content ... the heartbreak contained within this story should be illegal. Gosh, the way Taemin was so apologetic, throughout the whole piece, even though he was the victim was so incredibly sad. And when it es and he's pleading with Minho that things will be okay was beautiful in it's own painfully depressing way. And then his promising not to leave .... oooh the promising not to leave. It's as if Taemin does not understand the severity of the situation, and how broken Minho is. His innocence shines through so much more in his care and the way that they were on the verge of making eternal pledges of love for one another makes the impact of the death that much more powerful. This was such a gorgeously angsty set of stories, I cannot wait to see you use your ability to control emotions in a longer form. ^^

Chapter 1: asd;lfkja;sldjflsadjflal;j WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO MY HEART!!!?? -ugly sobbing in a corner- ugh ugh ugh -flailing helplessly in a sea of feelings- please please please, write something happy?
Thank you(?) for giving me a chance to use up all my tolerance for angst in one go ^^

Chapter 1: I'm going to cry I swear I'm going to start sobbing right here

Chapter 1: -sobs- Taemin you biiiitch you make me CRY~♪

Update please~

Can't wait! :D ♥