Chapter 1: oww they didnt become together? heheh

Chapter 1: I was so excited to get something less serious from you and here we are and as I knew you absolutely slayed it! OMG this was the cutest thing in the whole wide world. There's a little less analysis to do than usual, but it still was fulfilling. One thing that I adored that you did is that you teased your readers with what their relationship is. While it has some budding romantic connotations, it could easily be read as a story about really close friends. That struck me most with the 'I love you's. Because while it could have been in a longing way, something about it was quite brotherly. I think it was the way that Kris was holding Tao without either feeling any pressure of what it could mean. In that moment it was just two friends trying to help each other sleep. Really it's up for interpretation on how the reader wants to see things. Because just as easy it can be a bit of a love story, i.e. Tao's feelings when he first wakes up and decides to cuddle closer. Honestly I'm undecided ... considering the two character's narratives I think that it's a good mix of both. Love is in bloom. Maybe. Haha. I also loved how you were able to keep a good sense of humor in all the fluff. It wasn't overwhelmingly adorable (if it's even possible to make anything overwhelmingly adorable), yet it wasn't to sarcastic. You kept a nice, simple silliness that fit Tao well; it was perfect for his personality and his problems. He's the ultimate maknae here and his helplessness whether it be deciding what to do right when he gets home or fighting thunderstorms fits this role. As for Kris ... what more is there to say about the good, strong Leader? He takes care of everyone, he possibly has insomnia, he's comfortable cuddling s ... Kris is perfection. Their a cute pair and the personalities you shaped for them create a really great ying and yang dynamic that could use even more exploration if you chose to. You really did fantastic with this! You're range is incredible!

Chapter 1: /SCREAMS LOUDLY/ that last bit right at the very end~~ <3 <3 <3 I thought I was over spazzing about Taoris but evidently not xD That was so flipping cute! Poor baby taozi, so scared of thunder :( but omo imagine having kris sing you to sleep with that deep husky voice of his while hugging you... /gleefully dead/ ehehehe thank you for keeping my feels alive :D

Cant wait!! I want so badly to read this

i actually cannot wait :)