Chapter 2: This doesn’t make sense ,I don’t mind Hye Sung having a little sister, but it would be better if she didn’t know about Min Jin Gook because she wasn’t there and Hye Sung never told her to protect her and later Hye Sung and Soo Ha reluctantly have to tell her because of the cell phone. This story makes it all about her when Hye Sung was the one who was targeted, I mean you could still have Hye Yeon live with Hye Sung and meet Soo Ha but she didn’t need to be involved with the Min Jin Gook until she needs to be. But I doubt you’re going to read this anyway.
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