Shattered

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Shattered glass.
 
I could remember clearly, Taehyung would always tell me not to pick up broken shards no matter how scattered they were on the floor. He would alert me that they might torn through my clothes and poke through my skin; that blood would gush out of my senseless motions. He then said that it would then be a start of something disastrous.
 
But despite all the talking he did, I never listened to Taehyung.
 
I would always continue to pick up glistering pieces and be fine.  My collection grew as Taehyung's alcohol intake kept on increasing. My own greed towards this action was escalating while my time serving this voluntary job was lengthening.  Time was not a waste, however; I learned how to sweep the floor speckless with my own hands. I wanted everyone to step where they would want to. Free from thorns.
 
Although,
 
It was only until today that I finally got threatened by the alarming nightmare. The devotion to embracing fears that I once had have splattered across my sight. When Taehyung wasn't there by my side anymore.
 
Just when he left me, I became the shattered glass that I did not want to be. A bloody sight of despair.
 
I'm scattered, shattered. And there's no one around who could pick up my sharp edges.
 

Foreword

Title: Shattered

POV: 1st (Jeongguk's)

 

Just a few words.. this isn't my first fanficition though I want this to be one that I would actually finish. 

Shattered will be updated throughout the summer. I still don't have a specific plot for it and I am planning on working on that soon. Although, I do have inspiration taken from my experiences. I would want to incorporate them into this story.

I specifically chose the characters to make me confident about what I am writing... but I should tell you guys that this isn't my perception of them (or how they react in real life). So people keep in mind that despite the use of their voices and characteristics, the actions and manners in this story are purely fictional (which should be pretty obvious if you ask me OTL).

I'm a n00b at this writing stuff so... um orz.

 

Dedication to uhhh.. Eunji, Myung and Naeun. 

I forgot their real names but yeah if you guys see this.

This story is for you.

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Yeonjunkookie7
1122 streak #1
This sounds really interesting
smolder
#2
here ya go: (i made some changes but if you don't like it you're always welcome to ignore it ^^;)
http://pastebin.com/Ht0rnst5
smolder
#3
oh btw i found some grammatical errors umm can i fix them ouo
smolder
#4
UPDATE MAN
smolder
#5
YOU YOU WHEN DID YOU BECOME SO GOOD WITH WORDS
smolder
#6
hOLY YOUR WRITING IS SO AMAZING IT'S SURPASSING MINE GDY
PattyPatata #7
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it