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Daesung P.O.V

8 Months later.

I was feeling so much pain. 

Oh god! I am giving birth. 

My pretty child, Seunghyun our pretty child will be born today, but you are not here to see it. 

- Keep strong Daesung, everything will be fine. Don't you worry! Breath, don't forget to breath. C'mom 1, 2, 3, again 1, 2,... - I grabbed him by the collar.

- For God's sake, shut the hell up Jiyoung. Do you think this will help me? Ahhhhh! - Youngbae brought a bowl with hot water, scissors, tweezers, and other things for childbirth, shackles and bonds.

Oh my god, what I had gotten myself into? I was going to die. I would never have my daughter and Seunghyun will hate me for the rest of my life.

- Calm down hyung, it'll be fine. I'll give an injection on you, and you will sleep. By the time you wake up, your daughter will be in your arms.   - Can I trust you Seungri? No matter what, this child must survive. You understand that, right? - He looked into my eyes and I knew he was going to save her life even if it cost my life. My vision was blurred and I felt dizzy, my eyes were closing slownly. I passed out.   - Is he ok? Are you sure? He should be awake by now. - Someone said.   - It's okay. He is waking up, be quiet, his head must hurt. - He was right, I had a huge headache.    I opened my eyes, everything was running. Youngbae, Seungri, Jiyoung and Chaerin were staring at me.  I tried to get up, but they stopped me.   - You can't leave this bed yet. Is your head hurting?   - Yes, I have a spliting headache. What happende? - Youngbae looked down.   - We were moving you, but you were too heavy. So, I slipped, and you hit your head on the headboard. I'm sorry! - He bowed. I looked at their hands, but no one was helding my child. Where was she? OMG! Did something happened and they didn't
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ddeecullen
#1
Chapter 21: Author-nim ! oh god !! what are you trying to do ? is it will be 'gdae' at the last ? im so sad :(( hahaha ^^' btw, what a beautiful story. thumbs up >< thanks author-nim :))
KPVIP26
#2
Chapter 13: Its Baeri hun and yes, the feels!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
KPVIP26
#3
Chapter 10: OMONA!!! Daesungie, flex those muscles y!!! (fan-girls over my BB bias)

Writer-nim, the doctor won't kill u for that, if u let him know how u are feeling he will give u medicine for it. My Dongsaeng has it too and she gets iron pills to help with the weakness and dizziness, so make sure u tell your doctor, arasso?
KPVIP26
#4
Chapter 3: Psy = Park Jae sang
JaeYong_TY #5
Chapter 21: pleaaaseeee update soon

btw
FIRST BIGBANG FANFIIICCC

im getting into bigbang now its really great
choidae
#6
Chapter 21: omg!!love this chapter!
please update soon <3
Kang_Jiyong #7
Chapter 21: Dae look so cool and scary at the same time.....i love it......
bananakun
#8
Chapter 19: Hello~~I feel bored and re-reading your story and want to give some suggestion. Feel free to ignore it if you want~ uvu

It will the best if you point some of Se7en past. I think reader should know more about se7en in the past and tell us more about Dongwook. Maybe he's different from this se7en person. And from how you write in the story, I can't find a connection between Dongwook and se7en. So I think you need to reveal something concerning se7en.

About the pairing. I think it's better if you get along with GDae, Baeri, and Top7en. I guess it's not that bad idea make baeri together. I'm happy whoever Dae ended up with. If you make Dae with GD I think it's not that bad tho. Seeing how their story in the past make it legit enough for they to be together. Well the pairing can change depends how the story goes to. Still it's your story so it's all up to you. You can even make Se7en end up with Daesung if you want lololol. Kidding xDD

About the Gri tag, I think you should erase it. I don't think Ri can ended up together with Jiyong after how you make him being together with Youngbae and how it looks so hawt for me lololol. I love both Gri and Baeri, but I love Baeri more than it. If you make a plot twist where you make Ri together with Ji, it will hurt Bae so much. So please dooooonnnn't!!! Just please let him happy being together with Ri ;;A;;

Oh dear I'm talking so freaking long. Sorry for trashing your comment box lolol. Not sure if it can help you. But I hope it will help even just a little.
I'll wait for the next chapter no matter how long it make me to wait it. I love your story 'v')v
I hope you haven't abandoned it yet, *dooooonnn't!!!!!*