Turning Tables

By my side
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G-dragon POV

My head hurts like hell. I cant even think. Everything looks distant and blurry, I can hear voices, but I cant really understand what they are saying,  it takes me a moment to focus on their voices and from meaningless mumbles, I connect word with word, creating phrases. It was like the sound was traveling far, far away, and what I heard was echos. I try to open my eyes but it is too heavy, too difficult. I was almost falling asleep again, I try to pinch myself, but even lifting my arm looks impossible, as if my body don't belong to me. As if my mind and my body were in very distant places.

- Are you sure you didn't hit him too hard? - Somoene  said.

- Yes, I am. Look, he is strong, if I hadn't hit him like that, he wouldn't have passed out. I know what I am doing, I'm a xx class. You don't know that because you work at.. - The second voice said, but was cut off by first voice.

- Look! I think he's waking up, you take care of this mess. I'm out! - The first voice said.

- Are you really going to act like that? He'll understand everything if we explain to him.  - The second  pleaded. I try to open my eyes again, remembering the last scene I saw, just before I was captured. I try to get up, too fast, my head start to spin and the world goes black again.

- See, I told you. You hit him too hard, cant you control your own strength? - Someone said.

- You know I cant baby. That's the way you like it. - The second voice, Youngbae said.

- Dong Youngbae! You son of a ! - I manage to say, my hands hitting the bed.

- Woah, woah! Lets keep the respect, shall we? What bite you? - He shamelessly asks, as if he hasn't done anything.

- Ha, you're sooo shameless, how dare you betray him? How dare you? And who's that? Seungri? Great! Just kill me because if you let me live I swear I'll kill you! I swear it! - I scream trying to lift my own body. I look at Seungri, anger, hate, betrayed, my head was a mess.

- This is not what you think, you got it wrong hyung! We are by your side! - Seungri say trying to explain their situation. Oh! Was he saying, I was a betrayer too?

- you! I never! Betrayed him! I'm gonna kill you damn bastards! Sons of a ! You are no better than dogs! I'll give you a really slow and painful death! You can count on that! You. - Young

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ddeecullen
#1
Chapter 21: Author-nim ! oh god !! what are you trying to do ? is it will be 'gdae' at the last ? im so sad :(( hahaha ^^' btw, what a beautiful story. thumbs up >< thanks author-nim :))
KPVIP26
#2
Chapter 13: Its Baeri hun and yes, the feels!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
KPVIP26
#3
Chapter 10: OMONA!!! Daesungie, flex those muscles y!!! (fan-girls over my BB bias)

Writer-nim, the doctor won't kill u for that, if u let him know how u are feeling he will give u medicine for it. My Dongsaeng has it too and she gets iron pills to help with the weakness and dizziness, so make sure u tell your doctor, arasso?
KPVIP26
#4
Chapter 3: Psy = Park Jae sang
JaeYong_TY #5
Chapter 21: pleaaaseeee update soon

btw
FIRST BIGBANG FANFIIICCC

im getting into bigbang now its really great
choidae
#6
Chapter 21: omg!!love this chapter!
please update soon <3
Kang_Jiyong #7
Chapter 21: Dae look so cool and scary at the same time.....i love it......
bananakun
#8
Chapter 19: Hello~~I feel bored and re-reading your story and want to give some suggestion. Feel free to ignore it if you want~ uvu

It will the best if you point some of Se7en past. I think reader should know more about se7en in the past and tell us more about Dongwook. Maybe he's different from this se7en person. And from how you write in the story, I can't find a connection between Dongwook and se7en. So I think you need to reveal something concerning se7en.

About the pairing. I think it's better if you get along with GDae, Baeri, and Top7en. I guess it's not that bad idea make baeri together. I'm happy whoever Dae ended up with. If you make Dae with GD I think it's not that bad tho. Seeing how their story in the past make it legit enough for they to be together. Well the pairing can change depends how the story goes to. Still it's your story so it's all up to you. You can even make Se7en end up with Daesung if you want lololol. Kidding xDD

About the Gri tag, I think you should erase it. I don't think Ri can ended up together with Jiyong after how you make him being together with Youngbae and how it looks so hawt for me lololol. I love both Gri and Baeri, but I love Baeri more than it. If you make a plot twist where you make Ri together with Ji, it will hurt Bae so much. So please dooooonnnn't!!! Just please let him happy being together with Ri ;;A;;

Oh dear I'm talking so freaking long. Sorry for trashing your comment box lolol. Not sure if it can help you. But I hope it will help even just a little.
I'll wait for the next chapter no matter how long it make me to wait it. I love your story 'v')v
I hope you haven't abandoned it yet, *dooooonnn't!!!!!*