Chapter 10 -- The First Real Clue

Monsters: The Mousetrap

Hana headed for that place in Myeongdong again, now that she had fresh eyes, maybe she could figure out something. The area was bustling and there were numerous people walking out and about.

She looked around the shops and she saw a place where there was possible security footage. Gayoon had been taken near a store that had a camera outside to be aware of shoplifters. The store had a lot of cute clothes and it seemed likely that they would get a lot of people who would try to get the small earrings or little trinkets.

She walked inside the store and walked towards the woman inside, “Hello. I noticed you have security cameras, have you heard about the missing girl?” Hana asked her.

“You mean the one from yesterday? Hasn’t she just run off with another guy?” The woman answered skeptically.

Hana gave her a curt smile, “We don’t actually know what’s happened, but I would like to see your security footage if you don’t mind. Your camera was facing in the direction of where she was taken.” She said.

The woman shrugged her shoulders, “I doubt there’s anything useful on there. Kids these days.” She muttered to herself, shaking her head. “You can have a look if you want.” The woman pointed to the back where she kept all the tapes.

“How do you organize them?” Hana asked her, looking at the stack. 

“By date. The tape on top is the one from yesterday.” The woman answered dismissively, ignoring her as a customer walked in.

“Thank you.” Hana took the top tape and popped it into the VCR. She fast forwarded it until she got to the time that Yoseob and Gayoon were outside of the store. She pressed play and watched as Yoseob went around to unlock the car doors.

He had his eyes down for a minute as Gayoon’s eyes roamed around, she turned towards the alley and lifted her head slightly. Hana wondered what that kind of body language meant but she had no time to decipher it as she watched Gayoon walk away from her own boyfriend of her own free will.

Yoseob looked up to find his girlfriend gone and out of sight. She watched him yell and scream for her and he even walked down the alley to see if she was there, but no luck. She pressed rewind as she played it again but slowed down. 

Gayoon really did walk away on her own, which is what the other girls must have done. She had some sort of idea now as to why the girls weren’t reported as “kidnapped” because there was no evidence that someone had taken them and ran. Nor had anyone drove up in a van and tossed them in.

It was simply the fact that they had been distracted by something, she had to keep this and get back to her wall at the apartment so she could decipher Gayoon’s body language in the tape. She walked back outside, tape in hand and saw that the store owner was busy with someone.

She figured since no one shoplifted that day the owner wouldn’t miss the tape, but just in case, she decided to leave a note on the door for her. ‘Taking the tape from yesterday. Thank you for your help.’ And with that, she went back to her apartment.

She finally had something tangible in her grasp, she could feel it. She could get closer to the answers if she could only figure out what happened to Gayoon to make her go into that alleyway. She popped the videotape into her player which converted it to a DVD. Hana took a look in her refrigerator and noticed that Seungyub had managed to buy her some soda and left it for her. She took out a can before sitting down at her table.

She had the perfect view of the video as well as her wall, she could compare her notes while watching the video play out. Gayoon’s head tilt towards the sky had something to do with her notes, she just knew it. She watched it over and over again but she couldn’t figure it out.

She sighed, downing her can of soda before walking over to collapse on her couch, maybe she needed to get some shuteye or something. A knock at her door made her think otherwise, she checked who was and saw Seungyub on the other side.

She opened the door for him, and he came bearing gifts. “Hungry, noona?” He asked her, holding up a bag from the pojangmacha downstairs. She smiled at him as she inhaled the smell of the food.

“Ddeukbokki?” She asked him, she sniffed the air again before her eyes widened. She ran away from him and towards her wall.

“What are you doing?” Seungyub asked her as he walked calmly to the table, setting up the food. 

“A store in Myeongdong had security footage from last night and Gayoon walked away on her own after lifting her head up and this whole time I couldn’t figure out why but I know now.” Hana said in one breath as her fingers grazed her post-it with the scents.

She turned to him, “Oh really? And what reason is that?” He asked her, watching the footage as well.

“It is connected to the smells, she was inhaling a smell like I did just now when you brought the food. She recognized lilacs in the air and followed it.” Hana explained, playing back Gayoon’s action.

Seungyub clapped slowly, “Finally, you’ve got somewhere. Now what are you going to do?” He asked her.

She smirked, “First I’m going to go eat, and then head to the library and do some research. Just because i know it’s the smells now doesn’t mean anything. The smells don’t connect each other.”

“Yeah, true.” Seungyub said, handing her a toothpick and chopsticks for the japchae and kimbap he bought as well. “But at least you answered one of your questions, their favorite smells would lead them to whoever is kidnapping them.”

Hana smiled as he reminded her of her small victory. “You’re right and for that, I will celebrate."


Author's Note;
Guys, I finally got the opportunity to write ^^
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Mousetrap: this story is almost done :D I'm like so close... But I hope you enjoy the coming updates~

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0330-TBA
#1
Chapter 27: CH 25: Whoa that was some monster there. Anna~~~~ TT____________________________________TT But now time to find out some secrets and be reunited with Seungyub too~~ <3

CH 26: Sad to see it end~~ TT______________TT But it was SO DANG good~!!! <3 <3 <3 Really did love this!! :D Now onto Khun~~~ <3 Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUUUUUCCCHHHH~~~~~ <3 Love you~~~~~ Hehehe Seungyub got the hint XDDDDD
0330-TBA
#2
Chapter 25: I accidentally deleted the comments up until this point!!!! WAAAHHHHHH~~~!!!! TT_________TT

CH 15: WOO~~~!!!! THEY'RE TALKING!!!!! YEEEAAAAHHHH~~~~ XD But 15 people??? Dang! I didn't even know that many girls were taken :O

CH 16: She finally figured it all out! Woo!! But Anna... Where'd she go TT_______TT AHH!!!! She CAME!!! WAHHHHHHHH~~!!!

Ch 17: Yoshi~! Heard everything now just have to figure out how to beat the little witch. *fist pump* Poor Kiki though~ That must really sting every time he hears that from her (That he's the real monster). Crazy crazy stuff right there~!!!

CH 18: Whoa! He's SO caring~~ <3 <3 <3 <3 ADORABLE~~!!!!! Looks like things are progressing~~~ }:D (Hahahah XD Your inner battle XDD SO FUNNY!!! XDDD)

CH 19: Now she's using her as a threat to make Kiki go and do the dirty job?!?!?!?! What the H man. That's not cool. She gonna get her kicked~ >:| *On a side not super great to see how close they are getting now }:D

CH 20: WOO~~!! Figured out like everything I'm pretty sure! PLUS~ Got to still be in the same cell as KIKI!!!!! AHHH!!!!! So happy!!!!! (HAHAHAHA XD It's ok~~~ Even without it'll be amazing~~~!! XD

CH 21: Awwh man! He heard the last part?? TT______TT I llooooovvveee yoooouuuuuu <3 Hehehe. Yay for Kiki x Hana action~~!!!

CH 22: OMAGAWSHH!!!!! Just like aisdhlkadskfnkaljdslkgjaklsdngkanksdf. CAN NOT EVEN. Just died. Legit died. WAHH!!!!!!! (Now waiting anxiously to see what a white rose means)

Ch 23: Yeaahh~~~~ He just picked her up and boom. Taken care of. XD SOOOOO Excited to see where this will go~~!!!

CH 24: THEY KISSED~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then the old hag left and now the girls are back to normal~~ HEY!! Maybe they'll find Anna!!! Oh, maybe she was in a different cell??!?! Wait. Or maybe... idk. I'll wait XD
0330-TBA
#3
Chapter 9: CH 1: WAHH!!!!!! THIS IS ALREADY SO FREAKIN' COOL!!!!! WAHHH!!!!! Psh! Lame-o cops! Why ain't you doing your dang job?!!? Leaving it all to Seungyub and I. PSH!! But we can do a better job anyways :P DOJOON!!! WAHHH!!! I feel like I am seriously going to die during these series. Like OMGosh. Just dying and nothing really has even happened yet oh man. orz *fangirling too hard probs*

CH 2: So smart. Keeping the door in view at all times. Also making sure that no one can sneak up from behind. WOO! Awe, Yuri seems really sad! D; Glad to be helping out :) I wonder if that guy has any connection :O

CH 3: Whoa!! They're slowly finding out more and more!! Woo!!!! :) Seungyub is such a great helper/friend!! <3 FRIES~~~!!

CH 4: Her friend got taken too?!?!?! This guy is crazy!!! So sad TT_________TT Man Seungyub is insane! Super amazing!!!!! YAY FOR INVESTIGATING~~~~! XD

CH 5: I honestly have no idea either XD I have the same questions! XD AH! The guy man. Must be SUPER smart to just grab that many people and throw the police off that much so that they don't investigate :/

CH 6: ANOTHER ONE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Cube Ent..... Hmm..... Hyuna?! PS, I'm starting to want to eat one of those XD Sounds so delicious~~~

CH 7: DANG IT! It was Gayoon... I was close though XD Yoseob?? Poor Yoseob~! But really he's taken a girl a lot faster than before and now has taken a girl that was in a relationship. Boom. Things have changed plus the theories to the questions before have changed too I'm sure XD (Oh and your dancing is way good!!!)

CH 8: WHOA! This is so cool!! Dream revelation!!! Like everything during her dream is helping her out! And maybe even that guy has some meaning!!! WOOOOAAAAAHHH!! OH! And I see what you did there with Hyosung and secret XDDD (Everyone is so pretty. They're all good at dancing)
sam098 #4
Chapter 27: Wow! You are so awesome!!! I love yhis story!!
Do you wrote pther Beast stories too??
kpopfanforever77
#5
Chapter 26: You gave hints about the guy and girl convo?! i didnt even catch it!
Lyli21 #6
Chapter 27: I really enjoy this story so much. you bring my mood high and down author-nim. keep writing.
luv_kero
2454 streak #7
Chapter 27: I've really enjoyed reading this story and the mystery has kept me on my toes since I first subscribed! ^-^ You're a great story-teller, with your subtle hints sprinkled throughout the chapters. It's been a rollercoaster of a ride, trying to figure out all (or at least most, haha) of the secrets in this story. Ki Kwang is such a sweetheart and I'm so glad he's got a happy ending now! x] Kudos to you for a great job and I'm excited to read the next installment with Nichkhun! :)