Dancing In Red Shoes Can Kill You

Description

All YuKwon wanted was to be a dancer. When he started training, the dancer in charge said one thing that was important. "You want those red shoes." The red shoes marked the best dancer for the week, but also were a symbol of everything he dreamed of. Only the best dancers in the company had those red shoes and YuKwon wanted them so bad he could taste it.

He never thought that his dream would be the death of him.

Foreword

The only thing harder than getting the red shoes, was keeping them.

 

This story is a contest entry!

themightyrocklee
I'll admit this one was a little rushed. I have plans to go back and rework it, but for a first attempt at the genre, I think it's decent.

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akirachoi
#1
Chapter 10: and the end, yookwon can't take care of min D:
4everhite #2
Chapter 10: This is just cruel, lol. And scary! It scary when people's determination can harm others, wow. Overall I finally finish this! Yay me, I would have miss this great story! Poor ukwon though, and my heart. I only hope min wasn't hurt.
Great Job! This is unique, I think it should be horror, lol. I didn't even though it was them two. I mean they were close, I couldn't even imagine they were the one behind it. Out of everyone, I feel terrible for dongwoo, and taemin. I mean wow, that's just so cruel! Just wow... Red shoes scares me, I wonder iu- red shoes were about that legend.
why123you #3
Chapter 10: Wow! I thought it was only B-Bomb. I am surprised it was also Seungri. Anyway, nice and unique story.
mjooyeon
#4
Chapter 10: ...I need to kill someone. Why. My heart literally feels heavy and dark....
But this was good. Still subscribing even though it's finished to give you the credit you deserve :)
ElleJacobs
#5
Chapter 10: Wow. That was really good. Good job. My hearts though. :(
ElleJacobs
#6
Chapter 9: Minnie, no!!!! Ugh now I don't know if its someone in the the group or someone outside of it. I just hope Minnie and Ukwon are okay,
ElleJacobs
#7
Chapter 8: Yukon and Min, finally! I love it. I don't know... Seungri Bbomb and Jonggup all seem suspicious to me, more so the first two, who can be working together or something,
LyricalLove_Vip
#8
Chapter 6: Why do I feel like Seungri is to blame.
Bunnymail
#9
Chapter 2: Wow YuKwon X Min ? Never thought of that, anyway the story is diffeerent from others. Can't wait for the next chap !
kri-star
#10
O_O I really can't wait to see how this is going to turn out