Chapter 1: Did it mean indirectly Dasom's ghost killed Myungsoo? whoaa..

Congratulations on winning second place!

Chapter 1: it's interesting ^^ i love it !!!

I'm really in love with Myungsoo and Dasom couple . And i wish that I can find their fanfics . Thank u author nim .love u .muah

Chapter 1: It was interesting~

Chapter 1: Hi! I'm reviewing your story now :D

1.Foreword - 90/100
The foreword is good, here are some things I think would improve it and some things I saw:
-I think it’s better if you introduce the two main characters more- Myungsoo and Dasom. Put pictures of the characters then put their names below so that the readers would know the face of Dasom and L, also it would be better if you put their characteristics.
-Over all the foreword is good and catchy, so I gave you the score 90, very good! *claps*
2.Pictures - 90/100
The background and main image compliments the whole story. The picture of L and Dasom together gives the readers more feels about the characters.
3.Story plot - 95/100
Very good! The story plot is not what I expected but it was much better. Though, some words in the story confused me, I realized that it was some spelling mistakes. Over all, the plot is somehow confusing because of the mistakes, but it was worth it.
4.Grammar - 80/100
The story is good, yes. But I think you could polish your grammar and spelling more. There was a lot of grammar/spelling mistakes, and it confused the story a bit. Some capitalizations are missing, too.
5.Writing style - 98/100
Making the words gray and italicizing it gave me the feel of the story, and since I like paragraph style in writing more, very good!
6.Total markings – 90.6/100
Very good! Just work on your grammar and spelling, and it will be perfect. I hope I didn’t anger you in some way… ^.^

This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^

I like this idea, update soon, neh? ^^