Chapter 1: i liked a lot this one... the part "You are chaotic and exotic, and me just a clone, but willing to change" make me 'understand' what yongguk wanted or was looking for.
Chapter 2: Wow!~ This one was even better than the previous drabble!^^ It flowed so smoothly, and it had that poetic feel to it again. But it was even sadder than the last one! You sure do like sad, angsty stories don't yah ;D
And I think your English has improved since the last drabble! XD Great job :3
But yeah, I loved this one! Can't wait for your next one!^^
Chapter 1: Ooh~ this one was really nice, it was kind of sad, but I liked how realistic it was. And I don't know, the style and tone were very poetic, which I really appreciated^^
The only problem I had with this one was that there were a couple of spelling mistakes, but that's just me being picky XD And anyway, I'm guessing English isn't your first language so it's not like it really matters ;D
But anyways, sorry for rambling ehehe^^ I really enjoyed this one! Keep up le good work! ^_^
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