I'm not sure what to think of this. On one hand, I liked the idea of this story, on the other hand I felt it
was too slow, with no major development.  And surely, if someone else had put this idea into words, it
would have probably become an amazing oneshot.

I could have chosen to make it shorter,  but somehow it just became like this.  I'm still experimenting,
trying out different styles of writing.  I could have also make it longer,  into a threeshot (or a twoshot
on livejournal) but I felt it wasn't necessary.

Rereading through everything,  I noticed  my language is still nowhere near good.  I've tried writing
more detailed,  but I still at detailed descriptions.  I  might be okay with wording the character's
thoughts, but I still need to learn how to paint the environment and the figures with words.

Now,  I don't want to sound too negative,  because there are  surely hopefully some people who truely
enjoyed this piece of writing (?).

And I know my style of writing is pretty confusing,  with the time shifting and change of pov.  I tried
to cut it down though, so I hope you could still understand my logic.

I'm not much a fan of authors explaining their writings, because I think everyone is entitled to have
his or her own opinion and interpretation.  So I leave it to you,  to think about Sehun's role in here.  I