Saved

Description

 
 
 
S a v e d
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She woke up with a heavy heart,
wondering how she was saved -
or whether she was really saved at all.
 

 
the plot
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Krystal Jung was the typical epitome of luck. In fact, she was almost perfect - gifted with beauty, a loving family, job offers even before graduation... everything a girl her age could ask for. At the very day of her turning to twenty, however, her life drastically changed. She wakes up on a hospital after her birthday, struggling to open her eyes. As she did, only her best friend, Lay was beside her - not a single family member, and it  only signalled for one thing - they were gone. The events that accounted for her loss were a mystery, except for her best friend Lay and her ex-boyfriend, Kris.

As Krystal uncovers the events surrounding that night on her birthday, she sees herself in a situation where everything she knew about her family, her friends and even herself change right before her eyes. Was being on coast after the tragedy meant for her a life, or was she never saved at all?

Together, the three embark on a wave of truth, trust, self-worth, friendship and most of all, of scrutiny in love.

 

genre
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Romance, Angst, Mystery

 

rating
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PG-13. Some scenes may not be suitable for children under 13.

 
 
main characters
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• KRYSTAL
Luck has been my companion, touching the edge of my lips into a smile and holding my hands as I flew to my dreams. I had luck with me, until its contrary cursed me and stabbed luck's wings. I saw every soul pass by me as if I was invisible. Luck left me - alone, confused, lifeless. Lifeless, yes... but breathing. Tell me, was I saved?
 
 
 
 
• LAY
I saw greed swallow the ship whole, murdering every breath of happiness and celebration, and turning everything into a storm of cries - endless crying and gried. I witnessed how greed let out its evil laughter as anchors of hopelessness drowned the vast sea. I saw one that remained floating, and alas, I have saved.
 
 
 

 
• KRIS
Time ticked its way to tyranny - minding nothing but its tracks as souls ran through it with desperate cries. My vision concentrated on the focal point - a predator slowly heading to its prey - so filthy clean. Ironic but yes, filthy clean - a description of both time and the predator. All feet but a pair had ceased, but no, none was saved.
 
 
 
 
 
 
foreword
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I slid down the wall and hugged my knees, hoping I could comfort myself. To no effect, I ended up feeling just worse than planned. I slapped my face in hope of waking up from such nightmare, but no. It was real - tragically real.

 

Twice a knock was heard, shifting my attention. "Krystal, are you there?" It was my best friend, Lay. "I know you're there, so please open this door." He calmly demanded - as calm as he always was. "Please. Now."

 

I stood up from sulking on the cold floor, thinking his arms around mine might be some healing, even just for a temporary point in time. "Promise me you won't nag." I said as I reached for the knob, making sure of the serenity I needed before I opened the door.

 

"I never nagged. Do I?" I can imagine him raising a brow.

 

Opening the door, I was surprised to see him with someone - a persona I never expected nor wanted to see at the very moment. I turned my gaze back to Lay; a glare was enough for him to comprehend my sentiment.

 

"He said he wanted to talk to you." Lay explained. "It's an option I find to be better than allowing you to sulk in that room." The look of worry on his face was evident and the same feel was true with the touch of his hand on my arm. 

 

I leaned at Lay as if needing some sense of balance. In fact, I did need more than that - I needed a sense of companionship; I was sick of feeling alone. "What do you want, Kris?" I questioned without looking at the face I loathed.

 

 

thanks to...
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my friend, selinne, for the counteless help
exotic grounds layout shop 2 for the foreword's elegant layout
harlequin layout shop for the chapters' awesome layout
paper hearts advertisement shop for the ad

 

 
 
author's note
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Hi, everyone.
Newbie here ^^
This is my first fanfic, but I'll try my best to write well.
I hope you subscribe, comment and upvote.

 
 

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pegase2311
#1
Chapter 5: Your last update was on 2013. And here I am, on 2017 and still re-read this story. I sincerely hope that you continue this story even though I know that the percentage is low but a reader can dream rite? Hehe:") I don't know you'll read this comment or not, but if you do I hope you find the will to continue again and may Gof always bless you. Good luck!:)
usaisudah #2
Chapter 5: I hope you cancontinue this story
the plot is already great
RoyalDream #3
Hey, I hope you'll update soon~
jung_krystal
#4
Chapter 5: kristal please...
Runningmanfan0910 #5
Chapter 5: I want laystal
dubudub
#6
Chapter 5: Updet juseyo~~
athena08
#7
Chapter 5: The kris effect.. wohooo
dubudub
#8
Chapter 5: Omooo lay just say you love her!! Kiss her!! *excited*
Updet jusseyoo~~~
dubudub
#9
Chapter 2: More complicated >__<
Lay.. I know you love krystal right?! Omo just kiss her and tell your feeling!! *kyakyaaa