Take Me With You

Description

Donghae is grieving over the death of his lover, Eunhyuk. He reminisces the memories they had when his lover was still alive. Donghae can't bear the loneliness any longer and decides to take his own life to be with Eunhyuk once again.

Foreword

It's my first ever fanfic and i'm so damn nervous about the outcome of this story. And I don't even know why I came up with a EunHae fanfic when my pairing bias is HanChul! I guess EunHae really fits well in this fic. Well, i hope you'll like this story even if it's sad and short and a fail. Please feel free to comment and give suggestions so I can improve my writing. :)

Please also take time to answer my poll. kekeke~

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Hime-kun #1
Chapter 2: Donghae... author-nim killed Hyukie and made Hae suffer, and killed him too. That is harsh of u. But it's for the sake of the story , neh? T.T
queenfranchi #2
Chapter 2: So sad....
isolovesuju
#3
So sad! :'((
animerika
#4
is there a sequel? like when they meet in heaven?
animerika
#5
oh this makes me cry T-T if i was making a story like this my eyes would be red from too much crying.<br />
kimhyesuhearts #6
WOW . this is wonderful. I wish you write something about when they meet in heaven
BaByC_ELF
#7
it's...wow. I think your calling is sad fics. <br />
Your writing again doesn't burden the reader with unnnecessary details, yet it still manages to make them empathise with the character;s train of thought. You may not agree to Donghae's actions, but you can DEFINITELY understand it, and realise how much it makes sense to him.<br />
I have to say I really like this fic, because the heartbreak is so profound and it's so different from the usual attempts at misery between this or any of the suju couples for that matter.<br />
GREAT work Tatiana!<br />
(I hope you'll write a next one for me!)
AJ_hyukkie #8
Why so sad ..?? Why Hyukkie need to die?? Why Donghae had to killed himself??<br />
Anyway..its good to read some angst after a whole day of romance..kkk ^^ This is awesome..You made me cry~ ^^
HEEismylife #9
@Hakyurie: my other puppies are also sick..all four of them..T_T i'm afraid 3 are very ill and will die sooner..the other one is kinda ok now..<br />
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and gomawo for commenting..i'll make other stories soon..i don't have time now coz of my puppies..