in rivers [one-shot]

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sehun is a wild river that washes against kyungsoo's sides.

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yehet_pcy #1
Chapter 1: im three years late but thank you so much for writing and sharing this fic?????
i loved how sesoo was written into this you wrote it so well :(((((((( its pretty and beautiful and affected my heart in all the right ways like wowowowowoow
the kind of relationship they had was so unique. it's like ever since theyve been friends but more than friends and not quite but really and UGH I CANT EXPRESS IT THE COMPLEXITY OF THEIR FRIENDSHIP YET THE SIMPLICITY OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP i knoW I DONT MAKE SENSE PLEASE DONT HATE ME BUT THIS WAS REALLY SUCH A PLEASANT READ
this is the kind of fic that makes me think yup thats right best friends with feelings dont have to have for their feelings to be brought into light i mean this was so metaphorical and prettily written like HELLO?????? ahhhh i dont know what im saying i hope im getting it across how much i enjoyed reading this anyway
that kaisoo and hunhan conflict and the bridge that build between sesoo was honestly heart wrenching in the way that i just dont want them to be apart?\?\!/\?!? okay/?!/?/?? and i loved how the resolution was something calm like and as simple as just admitting that they missed each other
honestly i have no coherent words for how i felt with this fic. it was such a pleasant read. thank you for writing and sharing huhuhu
jumijumi
#2
Wow that was the cutest. It was so poetic and well written and I'm a er for metaphors and symbolism. The figurative language was just A+. Also when Kyungsoo kissed Jongin I almost screamed at my computer screen like "WHAT R U DOIN NO KYUNGSOO NOO!!" But I was really happy with the ending it made me feel all warm on the inside
diosaur
#3
Chapter 1: This was PERF <3... like actually was... which should make no sense in my book, cause im the biggest hunhan, kaisoo and baekyeol shipper ever! (So, i may have squealed a little at their appearances) but still... this sesoo or hunsoo or whatever you want to call it fic, was everything perf, put together with perf writing...

I only recently got into sesoo (i literally ship kyungsoo with anything that has two legs) through some youtube videos... and the feels i got, was just confirmed through this fic, cause the relationship i got from the vids, is exactly how this fic portrays it, playful touches with soo being the fake saeng (so when you mentioned that in the fic... i died... absolutely did...), and gosh you just nailed the spot... hammered it... and permanently tattoed it and gosh... i dont know how to react... going to scroll through your other writings now because even though you apparently dont write much exo as long as the quality is as perfect as this fic was... ill definitely support it <3
uberchrome
#4
Chapter 1: I'M CREEEEY BECAUSE YOU YOU YOU
ONE OF MY SECRETLY-INFATUATED-WITH WRITER idk if its right WROTE EXO AND I'M JUST SITTING HERE BECAUSE NOT ONLY IS IT EXO AND WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY BUT IT'S ALSO SESOO AND i'm just so happy okay so let me proceed on the actual comment:

it kind of irritates me how lazy i am that i cant write down my favorite lines from here so i'll just go and tell you that i absolutely adored the pace of this story and like like (i'm not good with words so) i love how you connected rivers and their stages and seasons along with sesoo's love life or is-it-eve-love kind of relationship.
okay i won't be lazy to quote this "Sehun is so still against him. Right now, he is not a river." because LORD THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND WOW I CANT COHERENT (I HATE this word btw this is like overused / too much but wow)

and of course, i like how their relation---SHIP kind of goes and i love love love how you play with words and teach me senpai and why am i always like this when i read some brilliant fic and i do hope you'd write more or anything really as long as it makes you happy because it makes me so happy reading them

and
nothing
hurts
/cries this is A+++++++++++++++++