The sun rises in the east and sets in the west like Donghae does. You don't have to look too closely to understand; sometimes you only have to turn away and just feel.
Chapter 1: This is probably the bluest summer vacation story I have ever read. But it’s beautiful blue and it involves Donghae and Hyukjae. Oh I love Hyukjae so much in this poetic piece and even though it’s not concluding and I feel crumpled but it gives hopes and warms my heart. I mean it’s complicated but I love it. Thank you.
WOW ! DAAAEEEEBAK !!! Your writting is truly beautiful ^^ (sorry, not fluent enough to give a better comment ;A;...Just thought I'd tell you you're awesome...)
Oh my word, this is so sweet :')
Never have I read fluff as cute and adorable as this. The way interpreted Donghae's father's death throughout the story felt real to me, because that's what I actually think Donghae still feels. He misses his dad but he knows he's still with him in his heart.
The way you described and tired everything in down with metaphors of the sun, clouds, stars, and all was just beautiful. That was pure genius. I'm sure it would've taken me not even a trillion years to come up with something like that :)
The books...oh how I love reading just as much as Hyukie and Hae do. I love how you can immerse yourself in a world totally different from the one we live in, how you can just feel and live for the moment even if it's not real, because you know very well that in your mind it is.
Also, on a much more provocative note: I want a y young man to serve me at the bookstore too ;) And then later we can kiss... x)
The progress is so smooth and gorgeous. Neither too drastic nor too sluggish, it's just fine and perfect.
And I love the development of their feelings, it's cute <3
This is brilliant! You deserve a praise! (lol, been watching too much RTP to develop this sentence)
"Love is quiet, it creeps up your insides and takes a grasp of your throbbing red flesh, and it feels like drowning, gasping for air to survive. Love is patient, it waits for you to realise then burns your securities down with one single spark that awakes at the beginning of the day when the sun comes up." ---> I really like this. And I agree actually. ^^
You're a very romantic writer. Every scene is dreamy and warm. ^^
UGH I CANNOT BELIEVE THE COMMENTS HAVE A WORD LIMIT. I mean for some writers comments SHOULD NOT HAVE A WORD LIMIT. Such as ninnim. ;A; BAWAGOWJGAG.
"Donghae smiles back even though he doesn’t know if Hyukjae can see it. He just does, and hopes Hyukjae knows what he means when they fall into a comfortable silence.
“Are you crying?”“No,” Donghae lies. “Are you?”“Maybe.”" This, and the paragraph before, are like... are so just... just... AWPEHGAGD perfection is NOT ENOUGH TO PUT MY FEELS. This kind of AIIHHAHHHSSSSSHHHH. If I bash my keyboard in and kill it WOULD YOU GET MY MESSAGE no probably not. Shucks. I really loved that little bit, I don't think it was probably all that significant to you, maybe, but it just stood out, and it was so nice. IT WAS SO NICE and now I CANNOT BREATHE RAH.
"The door has closed long ago." UGH I DON'T KNOW. I don't know how to interpret this because my feels go one way and my head goes the other and rah. But I don't know, I think the last paragraph gave some little chunks of teeny hope but I DON'T KNOW, I DON'T KNOW. "He’s not home now. He repeats the words for the remaining days." The repetition, everything, home, happiness, homygod HYUKJAE look IT'S ALLITERATION no it's just me being dumb and reading this too many times too early in the morning.
Ugh I'm in my little ball sobbing at this perfection. BACK TO BED.
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