Thunder

Description

There's something about Minki that stands out against the backdrop that is Jonghyun's annual family vacation to the island of Jeju. They are captivated by each other. They spend the perfect summer together, inseparable by anyone. At summer's end, after three long months of getting to know everything about one another, Jonghyun comes to find that Minki's past is much different than he's made it out to be.

 


 

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Foreword

            We huddled into the car like we did at the beginning of every summer. Every June the first since I could remember, the four of us piled into the car: Mom, Dad, Aron and I, plus the dog, Tosunnie, so there really wasn’t much room. The sleeping bags always blocked the rear view, so I suspected that we’d packed more than enough. We’d had to have; we’d stay there for months at a time. The small cabin we stayed in wasn’t bad, but it didn’t always smell the best, either. It usually smelled fine after we’d been living in it for a couple days, but that first whiff was always the most rancid. It wasn’t bad, the island. I actually liked it a lot. I really missed my friends most of the time, but it wasn’t the worst place in the world; I’d just rather have been somewhere else.

            I expected this time to be a little different, though. Mom had told us that the family that owned the cabin close to ours (and by close, I mean a good two mile walk away) were coming to spend the summer. They hadn’t done that in years. I never really cared to know why. I was happy that I’d have someone to talk to now, at least. They had a big family: a daughter, two sons and a dog whose name I had forgotten. I vaguely remember playing with their children those many years ago. I was sure they were different now than they were then; it’d been a good ten years since I had seen them. At least I’d have something to do other than laying in my creaky bed, staring at my cell phone and hoping and praying to catch a signal.

            I didn’t even have to glance over my shoulder to know that Aron was asleep already. It was like him to sleep wherever we went. I was surprised he wasn’t diagnosed with a sleeping disorder by then. It would be another three hours before we reached the port and boarded the boat that we tugged along behind the tiny car. I really liked Jeju. It was never too hot or too cold, and I loved the breeze that would pour off of the ocean surrounding us.

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adrika
#1
Chapter 5: Come back soon ; A ; i've been waiting for ages ; A ; "please don't abandon me," says Thunder.
jongdayifun
#2
Arent you going to update this story :'(
bluedragon
#3
Chapter 5: in love with this chapter. oh my gosh...
oppach #4
Chapter 5: A lovely story--why aren't there more stories with Ren? tsk tsk. I have a nagging feeling that this one will end sadly.
amEmeaT
#5
Chapter 5: Awww ~~ this so amazing ~ this is so killing me ;( i need a guy like ren , i want him <3 or like JR *_* or anyone LOL i wanna know what happened to minhyun !!!
update soon ~~
lindsey_marie #6
Chapter 5: This is so perfect Drake! JRen! You are such an amazing writer. Have I ever told you that?
falliblefantasy
#7
Chapter 5: I'm utterly mind blown by the entire scene in the second half of this chapter. JRen finally <3 You wrote it so beautifully :)
It's really great to see JR relaxing a little (somewhat) and actually initiating, rather than their usual where Ren does all the talking. And JR's thoughts are getting clearer here. One thing I still find intriguing with your use of words here is how JR mentioned that he and Ren weren't imaginary beings, yet there's this absolute surreal quality to his every description of Ren. And to add on, JR's mention of heartbeat was interesting, since from here, it seems that he sees it important enough to speak of his own but not of Ren's - it leaves me wondering somehow (whether or not it was your intention).

Minhyun's presence here just held questions. JR passed him by but he didn't notice? And you mentioned rain later. So Minhyun was sitting in the rain?
KrazyK #8
Chapter 5: I wonder what is going on with Minhyun? Is Ren real and why has no one questioned where JR is going? And ...they finally kissed!