Title: 2/5
At first I thought that "Dragonborns" were a username instead of a title. Well, I don't read fantasy fiction so when I heard your 
title, I was going to say that you shouldn't put an "s", but I realize it's a term. Woops, haha. 
But the simplicity of the title is cool, as if it can be a title you see in novels... Good job! But still, first impression of the 
title... Um, I'm going to skip it if I ever scan and see the title.



Graphics/Poster: 4/5
This isn't a graphic review so I won't criticize this, haha. It is pretty good, Joon at the back is too faded though. If that's so, 
Himchan's opacity should be the same as Joon then. 


Description and Foreword: 11/15
"elves", not "elf's"
What if they still exist, but we have no clue. ---> It should be a question right? So it should be, "What if they still exist, but we have no clue?"
If you play that in your head, it sounds nice. xD haha.
Don't put a comma after "neighbor's".

At the part were you wrote about Slovene's mythology, I got confused when you wrote "that dragons'", is dragon a person? Unless you mean "that the dragons'". Wait do you get me? haha, it's a small mistake so I'll just continue.

Your description and foreword are actually nice to see, especially the layout of it. I love red. <3



Characterization: 9/10
You portrayed the characters well enough to make me imagine the actual idols doing it. Good job! Is the Ailee in your story Ailee the 
idol? She wasn't in the poster so I got a little confused. Oh and the most important characters that aren't in the poster appeared 

first, so it would really confuse the reader. (well me, haha.) 

Grammar and Spelling: 29/30
"Girl sat down next to him" ----> The girl sat down next to him
I love how you stay at the same tense, because actually I'm still having a hard time with that.
Honestly, you have very few errors that can just be ignored. You have good grammar and you seem to make a point as you write every
sentence, that's good. Keep that up.


Plot/Originality: 15/15
Honestly original. I'm trying to be harsh but seriously it is original.

Flow: 9.5/10
Smooth flow. I'm still confused though as I continue to read, but after reading it over again, it's alright.

Bonus/Overall Enjoyment 9/10
It's interesting! It could be a novel! But somehow it's a little boring which is my opinion because I don't really read these kind of fiction so don't take it to heart. Am I confusing you? The storyline and plot is interesting but somehow like a 10%, I got a little bit bored and just ended up scanning the whole story. 

Score: 88.5/100
Super sorry if this doesn't look harsh to you!

Reviewed by superabsolute