Winter Rose -- Her Lovely Winter Rose

Title 10/10

Your title was very nice! It captures my attention (and everybody else's I hope)

Foreword+Description 5/5

Can I say that I LOVED your description? It really draws in people (ouo)

Characterization 8/10

You really brought out Luhan's character. The cheekiness was brought out really well.  But Seohyun... yeah, she's cold, but she kind of changes too much. Glaring at everybody and then sticking with Sehun?  Great work anyways :)

Grammar & Vocab 35/50

Your grammar's fine, but I saw that sometimes you wrote "u" instead of "you",  and a few other mistakes. It's fine, really, and doesn't affect the overflow, the meaning, or the understanding of the story.

Plot 33/35

We finally have a story where Seohyun is cold and Luhan is back to cheeky and happy (not a jerk!) ! YAY! I really appreciate you using a different character for them!

Overall 91/100

REVIEWED by kpopandvarietylover.

Sorry for taking so, so, so long with this. Please forgive me! I was being lazy, and you can kill me (ouo)