3 To Win 1 -- TheMasquerade

Title: 6/10

It wasn't that attractive. "3 to win 1". The reader can easily guess what's it about. 3 people fighting to win 1 person. But it's still a special one. Normally people would just write "Omo, three boys fighting for 1 person?", so yeah, your title's not bad. It's simple and clear.

Foreword and Description: 4/5

Normal description and foreword. Nothing much for me to say.

Characterization:  10/10

The characerization is perfect. You totally brought out all the characters, especially Amber. Keep up the great work. And finally, a fic with both Kris and Tao in it and they're not gay! YAY!

Grammar and Vocab:  45/50

Well. Your grammar is very good. Isn't strange, considering you come from the United States. Your vocab isn't bad either. It would be nicer, though, if you used some better words to describe their feelings. I found a slight mistake: In Chapter 4, when f(x) came up, Amber dressed casually, not dressed casual. Just remember to get your adverbs and adjectives right.

Plot: 33/35

It's good. Especially the twist about Amber talking about her ideal type and every boy saying they fit the requirements. That's a very nice part, and it did make me smile. I almost never smile when I read fanfics. So, it's quite good. I deducted two points because it wasn't that original. But remember that your fic is already very good ^^

Overall: 98/100

OKay, I didn't realize I gave such high marks until I added them together. Your story's got a very smooth flow, and it's quite a page-turner (well not really a page but you get what I mean). It's a great story in overall. ^^ Very funny ^^Good work!

REVIEWED BY kpopandvarietylover