Flown

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“I always wonder why birds choose to stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth, then I ask myself the same question.”

–Harun Yahya

 

 

 

Foreword

 

We look at the birds

and then we think to ourselves

how free they are,

soaring high above the earth

but we rarely realise

that in a way, we are so alike

both confined under the same skies

 

 

written for this competition; beautiful graphics by --YatLuvG @G-Way Graphics

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ilovesleep #1
Chapter 2: First, Thank you for writing. This is a piece that left me wondering. Second, I wish it could have been more elaborate.
There's still a nagging itch at the back of my throat, that insatiable 'why?'. I got the 'sister complex' part and the murder of Chained as triggers to Soojung's downfall. But I wonder, were those really enough trauma to cause Soojung to lose her mind and kill? I think superiority comes naturally to older siblings. When they boss the younger ones, it's mostly out of instinct. The chaining of Soojung was a lil off though. Why would Jessie do that? Unless she must have seen something more "sparkly",something more beautiful...something that threatened her superiority in her sister. I dunno. It felt like i was waiting for you to stab me but you've only scratched me. Mmmmmmm... Don't mind me. Just a hopping kid,reading and commenting. Thanks for the read. :) fighting.
bapexo #2
Chapter 2: pretty, beautiful stuff
amazingly written
i love the plot
k-rst-n #3
Chapter 2: what is this tori
why do you write so beautifully omg
I am so jealous I can't even
this was amazing
the way you described everything was perfect
I think the ending was perfect too
just
ugh I am so done with you
you're too good of a writer. stop so others like me can have a chance
/cries
THIS WAS AMAZING THOUGH OK
--YatLuvG #4
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LOVEBMOUNIER #5
This was so beautifully written *_____*
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