Prologue

Flown

People mistaken me as a nice person, because I don’t say anything.  They couldn’t be further from the truth.  There’s a saying that goes ‘If you have nothing positive to say, then it’s better not to say anything.”  I learned this early on, getting whipped for speaking my mind so boldly. 

Now, I keep the words in my closed mouth.

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ilovesleep #1
Chapter 2: First, Thank you for writing. This is a piece that left me wondering. Second, I wish it could have been more elaborate.
There's still a nagging itch at the back of my throat, that insatiable 'why?'. I got the 'sister complex' part and the murder of Chained as triggers to Soojung's downfall. But I wonder, were those really enough trauma to cause Soojung to lose her mind and kill? I think superiority comes naturally to older siblings. When they boss the younger ones, it's mostly out of instinct. The chaining of Soojung was a lil off though. Why would Jessie do that? Unless she must have seen something more "sparkly",something more beautiful...something that threatened her superiority in her sister. I dunno. It felt like i was waiting for you to stab me but you've only scratched me. Mmmmmmm... Don't mind me. Just a hopping kid,reading and commenting. Thanks for the read. :) fighting.
bapexo #2
Chapter 2: pretty, beautiful stuff
amazingly written
i love the plot
k-rst-n #3
Chapter 2: what is this tori
why do you write so beautifully omg
I am so jealous I can't even
this was amazing
the way you described everything was perfect
I think the ending was perfect too
just
ugh I am so done with you
you're too good of a writer. stop so others like me can have a chance
/cries
THIS WAS AMAZING THOUGH OK
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LOVEBMOUNIER #5
This was so beautifully written *_____*
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