Chapter 5: then again..it's hard to point out right and wrong, because many things can be right and wrong at the same time depending on the angle n how you look n perceive it.
Sorry if the blabbering is too long n offensive that i had to double comment but this is probly the reason it took this long....but i'm glad i'm letting it all out. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poignant piece. *runs*

Chapter 5: i've been wanting to comment on this for the longest of time(well, eversince i read it awhile ago)...but i always lost words. i could't form opinions in words n there's just something extremely bothering n sad about this....T^T.
first off, i studied a variety of religions back in school for world history subject but i wasn't bright n there's too many things to memorize so some things still confuses me...but yeah...i feel that religiousness, humanity n conscience are some themes interweaved beautifully with strong melancholic nature here...aaahhh, idk, i might be wrong but that's the feeling i get from reading it everytime i come back trying to leave comment n failed.
and random but i find the title n poster so captivating....><
Siwon seems like a character filled with pride, with who he is n his beliefs n just everything, even as he tried to be modest n all. but as religious as he is...he seems to be lacking in faith n conscience.n pretty judgmental.n too dependent on what the Reverend says n the bookrules of religion without really thinking n understanding beyond it all...idk...sorry if i'm wrong...
Ryeowook is soo mysterious that when i first read this i thought he's actually dead...n what Siwon met was a ghost...ahh, silly thought but thought i'd let it be known lol.
and the Reverend...when i first read this...it actually occurred to me that could this be the guy Ryeowook had affair with? idk why but something is suspicious about them right from the moment Ryeowook arrived n the way the Reverend kept showing concern to Siwon about how Ryeowook's influencing him...ahh, another crazy thought though...sorry....><
as much as i'm side-eyeing the Reverend...in the end....i could only put the blame on Siwon...Ryeowook's speech at the end made me so depressed n sad n heartbroken...n i love that feeling. but i'm glad that Siwon grew matured and acknowledged his mistake. and the last sentence is so simple yet perfectly heartbreaking with its poignancy.

Chapter 5: I loved the ending, as sad as it was. It was obvious how Siwon growed up and matured to except some things that were just unthinkable to him when he was younger. I also liked that it was at least a little bit open so they could still get a happy end one way or another, even if probably not together, somewhere along the line in the future.

Chapter 4: i love this story

first everything was so nice but still interesting and i think you forshadowed well for the twist - one could see it was coming but it still didn't spoil the surprise and you stay with one voice (siwon's in this case) so well

one person limited works great for this story and you know how to use it, we can see everything without siwon going out of character or it being too obvious

Chapter 1: this looks interesting

very original concept

I cant wait for this fanfic!