The Inferno's Kiss

Description

MiEun suffers from her parents' over-protectiveness after a romantic dance she had with death three years ago. Now, her life abides by the rule that only on November 12, her birthday, she is allowed to leave the confines of the house and roam around as she pleases. That is, until she decides to break it. Then, she meets Daehyun, who insists that she's his long lost love EunMi. Like a blind lamb led to slaughter, she follows him. He only has one rule: Don't look under the bed. 

Foreword

 

 

 

Omnes relinquite spes, o vos intrantes.

Abandon all hope, all ye who enter.

 

excerpt : 

She shivered, feeling cold chills crawl up her back. He her glossy hair slowly, twirling the strands between his thumb and forefinger. He whispered in her ear, his hot breath on her neck, "EunMi...why do you look at me like that? So full of distrust? It's me. Daehyun."

She shook, her nerves rattled. There was no mistaking the mad gleam in his eyes. She treaded carefully, picking her words with caution, "You're like the devil incarnate."

He smirked, tracing his fingers against the outline of her lips. “We are each our own devil, and we make this world our hell.” That was what he told her before he stole her lips. 

 

 

 


Prompt: "I had to make a memory that the both of us can never forget"

-BTOB's "Irresistable Lips"

 

 

 

 

written for: 

( ★ annyeonghaseyo! — writing contest ' )

 

credits: 

poster&background; gray--@ ❇ DIMENSIONAL

review;

kpopxoxo@ little additions

xodarkmistox@ on glory's edge (x)

 

 

 

aeterniti
50+ subs. Gosh, I'm crying already. Thank you for all the support. Gathering ideas in my head for a sequel if my life will permit it. -.-

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ohgodwhat
#1
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I'm not even a BAP fan but like this was rlly good gosh
YOU'RE AMAZING
expiredpieces
#2
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Coolcutiedj #3
Chapter 2: Xi Luhan? The most manly, baby faced angel? A murderer?? When I first saw his name as a convicted murderer.... I LAUGHED MY OFF!? HAHAHAHAHA!! Well.. Gotta continue the story... ^_^
LavenderAlisa19
#4
Chapter 9: I knew it: Xi Luhan and Daehyun were the same person! Err.. they are, right? Haha.

And yes, there were so many symbolism in this story. Honestly, I only noticed the 'white nightgown' that you used frequently and that symbolises innocence. And I felt completely out of place when it said, "slippers that were made of lamb's wool". I was like, "you could've just used "she wore the slippers that were placed nearby." or something". Lol, never did I know that it was actually a symbol. I'm sorry.

Hyun, Xi Luhan, Daehyun and Jung Daehyun.
I actually had the thought that Xi Luhan was just the name that the people gave to the 'insane murderer'... and he was actually Daehyun.
I really thought that Hyun was Jung Daehyun. Considering that Mieun had never met him again after their second encounter --maybe he (Jung Daehyun) was killed afterwards by his parents? But to think again, it was never mentioned that Jung Daehyun went outside. So, Hyun can never be Jung Daehyun.
And it never crossed my mind that Jung Daehyun and Daehyun were actually different.

Oh well, all in all. The story's amazing! *applauds* although I feel a bit dizzy at the moment lol. Moving on to read the sequel now.
JongHaNa
#5
I finished reading your story all in one day,
And it's REALLY good, it had so much detail and description.
I was honestly really scared of what was under Daehyun's bed because at first... I thought that there was a dead body.
I understood the story, but just don't know if Luhan and Daehyun are the same person and that's all.
I will move on and read the squeal now.
Update that soon.
Ellison
#6
I started reading it and ur title really reminded me of The Divine Comedy by Dante Alighieri. Then I went on the 1st ch and saw canto 1 (: made me smiile, I adore his work.
Can't wait to finish this fic! :D
Gazeru
#7
Chapter 9: Oh, I haven't really commented on your story properly didn't I? keke. Sorry for that. T.T
Well, first of, I love the theme for this story. Not many people write this kind of story.
But I gotta say that, yes, this story is confusing because you used lots of symbolism. I'm not saying that you did the wrong thing it's just that not many readers can interpret the whole story properly. It takes a lot of time to ponder over this kind of story. I, myself, am not that good at interpreting stories with metaphors and such.
(Maybe that's why people choose to read simple love story)

My interpretation:
Mieun wants freedom so one day she ran away and then she met this guy, Daehyun. She doesn't know who he is so she's afraid of him (since he's kidnapped her) but he takes care of her like she's the most precious thing to her, which results into her falling in love with him. At this point, I assume that it's stockholm syndrome.
But then, as I read more, I learn that Daehyun's a crazy guy. So I thought 'Oh, so he's an overly obsessed guy'.
And slowly, the story starts to unravel some of the mysteries.
It turns out that Daehyun thinks of her as eunmi. I assume that he uses mieun as a replacement. When mieun founds out about the truth, she loses her mind and decides to run away. Daehyun manages to stop her but she kills him.
Turns out that she didn't really kill him so at that point, I realize that she's crazy too. In the end, Daehyun died anyway because of Jung Daehyun's disease.
So yeah, that's what I think about the story. I don't think you could understand me completely, sorry. keke
My mind is not deep enough to understand your story. OTZ I apologize if I ever disappoint you, author.
krinkle_shawol #8
Chapter 9: I suggest you listen to Jieun and BYG's Going Crazy while reading this :) Oh, this fic DAEBAK, by the way :D Good job, author-nim!
tabiiii
#9
Chapter 9: Theres a sequel omfg XD